Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, I often go to the library because I want to read some books in library to improve my skills about knowledge that I should read some books to improve my maths and English skill.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
I usually do some houseworks or read some books about English and math because I think math is difficult for me and I'm interesting with English.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
No, I seldom go to library when I was a kid because I'm very young. If I want to go to the library, my parents should get me to there. If necessary, I will go to library to buy some books or stories.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library to buy or borrow some stories that teachers allow to buy some books if necessary. Chinese people or kids often borrow some stories which they like.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答时应避免重复表达,句子结构不够自然。建议简洁明了地表达去图书馆的原因,并使用更自然的表达方式。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library to read books that help me improve my math and English skills.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中出现了语法错误和用词不当,如“houseworks”和“I'm interesting”。建议使用正确的词汇和语法,并且句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: I usually read books about English and math because I find math challenging and I'm interested in English.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 时态使用不正确,句子结构混乱。建议使用过去时态描述过去的情况,并且表达更清晰。
Ví dụ: No, I rarely went to the library when I was a kid because I was very young. My parents had to take me there if I wanted to go.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答内容重复且表达不够清晰。建议简洁明了地说明中国孩子去图书馆的情况,并避免重复。
Ví dụ: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library to borrow or buy books, especially those recommended by their teachers.
× I want to read some books in library to improve my skills about knowledge that I should read some books to improve my maths and English skill.
✓ I want to read some books in the library to improve my knowledge and skills, so I should read some books to improve my math and English skills.
这里存在单复数错误,例如“library”前缺少冠词“the”,“maths”应为“math”,“skill”应为复数“skills”。此外,句子结构不清晰,建议调整表达。
× I usually do some houseworks or read some books about English and math because I think math is difficult for me and I'm interesting with English.
✓ I usually do some housework or read some books about English and math because I think math is difficult for me and I'm interested in English.
“houseworks”应为不可数名词“housework”;“interesting”应为形容词“interested”,且搭配介词“in”。
× No, I seldom go to library when I was a kid because I'm very young.
✓ No, I seldom went to the library when I was a kid because I was very young.
描述过去的动作应使用过去时态,“go”应改为“went”,“am”应改为“was”,且“library”前应加冠词“the”。
× If I want to go to the library, my parents should get me to there.
✓ If I wanted to go to the library, my parents should take me there.
“get me to there”用法错误,正确表达应为“take me there”;同时条件句时态应一致,使用过去时“wanted”。
× If necessary, I will go to library to buy some books or stories.
✓ If necessary, I will go to the library to buy some books or stories.
“library”前缺少冠词“the”,应加上。
× Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library to buy or borrow some stories that teachers allow to buy some books if necessary.
✓ Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library to buy or borrow some stories, and teachers allow them to buy some books if necessary.
句子结构不完整,缺少主语“them”,且表达不清晰,需调整。
× Chinese people or kids often borrow some stories which they like.
✓ Chinese people or kids often borrow some stories that they like.
“which”在限定性定语从句中应使用“that”更合适。