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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you often go to the library?

Thí sinh

Yes, I often go to the library, especially when I need to prepare for my examinations. I found it a quick and comfortable place where I can focus on study without distinguishing. Additionally, the library has many useful resources.

Giám khảo

What do you usually do in the library?

Thí sinh

Yes, I usually read books and taking notes in the library because it's a quiet place that can helps me focus better. For example, recently I have been reading novels and studying materials for my course. There I found that that the peaceful environment allows me to concentrate without distinction.

Giám khảo

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Thí sinh

No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I don't really know what about library was at that time. Also, I wasn't very interested in reading books back then because I prefer playing outside with my friends. However, now I often visit library because I enjoy.

Giám khảo

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Thí sinh

Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library, especially students like me and my classmates. We frequently use the library to do our homework and prepare examines because it provides a quiet and resourceful environment that can help me focus better.

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Part 1

Do you often go to the library?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了去图书馆的频率和原因,但存在语法错误和用词不当,如“distinguishing”用词不准确,且句子结构不够自然。建议注意动词时态一致,避免使用不恰当的词汇,并使句子更简洁流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library, especially when I need to prepare for my exams. I find it a quiet and comfortable place where I can focus on my studies. Moreover, the library offers many useful resources that help me learn better.

What do you usually do in the library?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“taking notes”应为“take notes”,“can helps”应为“can help”,且“without distinction”用词不当。建议注意动词形式和搭配,避免重复词汇,并使用更准确的表达。

Ví dụ: I usually read books and take notes in the library because it is a quiet place that helps me concentrate. For example, recently I have been reading novels and studying course materials. The peaceful environment allows me to focus better.

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中时态混用且表达不够清晰,如“don't really know what about library was”不符合语法。建议理清时态,使用完整句子表达过去的情况,并补充原因使回答更具体。

Ví dụ: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a child because I didn't know much about it. Also, I wasn't very interested in reading books back then since I preferred playing outside with my friends. However, now I often visit the library because I enjoy reading.

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答中“prepare examines”用词错误,应为“prepare for exams”,且句子结构略显重复。建议使用更准确的词汇,并尝试丰富句式,使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library, especially students like me and my classmates. We often use it to do our homework and prepare for exams because it offers a quiet and resourceful environment that helps us concentrate better.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× I usually read books and taking notes in the library because it's a quiet place that can helps me focus better.

I usually read books and take notes in the library because it's a quiet place that can help me focus better.

动词并列时,应该保持形式一致。这里'read'是动词原形,后面应该用'take'而不是'taking'。另外,'can helps'中'helps'应为原形'help',因为情态动词后接动词原形。

Third person singular issue

× it's a quiet place that can helps me focus better.

it's a quiet place that can help me focus better.

情态动词后面的动词应为原形,不能加-s。这里'helps'应改为'help'。

Past tense issue

× I found it a quick and comfortable place where I can focus on study without distinguishing.

I found it a quiet and comfortable place where I can focus on studying without distraction.

原句中'distinguishing'用法不当,应使用'noun'形式'distraction'表示'干扰'。另外,'focus on study'应改为'focus on studying',动词后接动名词。

Verb + -ing form

× I found it a quick and comfortable place where I can focus on study without distinguishing.

I found it a quiet and comfortable place where I can focus on studying without distraction.

动词'focus on'后应接动名词形式'studying',而不是名词'study'。

Verb + -ing form

× There I found that that the peaceful environment allows me to concentrate without distinction.

There I found that the peaceful environment allows me to concentrate without distraction.

'distinction'意思是'区别',不符合语境,应使用'distraction'表示'干扰'。

Past tense issue

× No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I don't really know what about library was at that time.

No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I didn't really know what the library was at that time.

句子时态不一致,前半句是过去时,后半句也应使用过去时。'don't'应改为'didn't'。另外,'what about library was'结构不正确,应改为'what the library was'。

Present tense issue

× However, now I often visit library because I enjoy.

However, now I often visit the library because I enjoy it.

'visit library'缺少冠词'the','enjoy'后应加宾语'it',使句子完整。

Incorrect use of the definite article

× However, now I often visit library because I enjoy.

However, now I often visit the library because I enjoy it.

'library'前应加定冠词'the',表示特指。

Incorrect use of the definite article

× However, now I often visit library because I enjoy.

However, now I often visit the library because I enjoy it.

缺少宾语,'enjoy'后应加宾语'it'。

Incorrect use of the definite article

× Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library, especially students like me and my classmates.

Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library, especially students like me and my classmates.

此句无冠词错误,保持原句。

Incorrect use of the definite article

× We frequently use the library to do our homework and prepare examines because it provides a quiet and resourceful environment that can help me focus better.

We frequently use the library to do our homework and prepare for exams because it provides a quiet and resourceful environment that can help me focus better.

'prepare examines'用法错误,应为'prepare for exams'。'exams'为复数形式,且需介词'for'。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BackRear; Reverse; Backward
BetterSuperior; More advantageous; To a higher standard
ComfortablePleasant; Cozy; Loose; Leisurely
InterestedAttentive; Concerned; Partisan
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
QuickFast; Hasty; Sudden; Intelligent
QuietSilent; Soft; Peaceful; Unobtrusive
UsefulFunctional; Beneficial
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