Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence flow. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I used to go to the library when preparing for my university entrance exam. However, now I study in my quiet study room at home, which helps me concentrate better.

Gợi ý: Your answer provides good details but is somewhat repetitive and could be more concise. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repeating phrases like 'I used to go to library'. Also, try to vary your vocabulary for a more natural response.

Ví dụ: When I went to the library, my friends and I studied together. I often used my PC to research homework problems online. Because the environment was quiet, it helped me focus and concentrate better.

Gợi ý: Your answer tells a story but is a bit long and contains some grammatical errors. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, watch for verb tense consistency and plural/singular agreement.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did go to the library as a child. I remember once asking my father to take me with him. However, since I was noisy, he took me home early and didn't bring me again.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but has some awkward phrasing and minor errors. Try to use clearer sentence structures and linking words to make your points more coherent. Also, avoid small mistakes like 'the four kids' instead of 'young kids'.

Ví dụ: I don't think Chinese kids often go to regular libraries because adults prefer quiet environments and kids can be noisy. However, there are special libraries designed for children to encourage reading and teach them library etiquette.

× Well, I used to go to library when I was preparing myself for UEE university entrance exam.

✓ Well, I used to go to the library when I was preparing myself for the UEE university entrance exam.

The noun 'library' is a singular, countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific library. Similarly, 'UEE university entrance exam' is a specific exam and needs the definite article 'the' before it.

× Ever since then I've never been to a library since in my house there is a study room and whenever I need to study, I need just to have concentration, I go to my room and I use that space.

✓ Ever since then, I've never been to a library since in my house there is a study room, and whenever I need to study, I just need to concentrate; I go to my room and use that space.

The sentence has some redundancy and awkward phrasing. 'Need just to have concentration' is incorrect; it should be 'just need to concentrate'. Also, adding commas improves clarity. The article usage is correct here.

× As I said earlier, I used to go to library a lot and it's been a while.

✓ As I said earlier, I used to go to the library a lot and it's been a while.

The noun 'library' is singular and countable, so it requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific or known library.

× I haven't been to a library, but I can tell you about the time I used to go to library.

✓ I haven't been to a library, but I can tell you about the time I used to go to the library.

Again, 'library' is a singular countable noun and needs the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific library.

× Of course, yes, I vividly remember that my father would go to library that was in proximity where we live at the time, and just once I asked my father persistently to take me with him to the library.

✓ Of course, yes, I vividly remember that my father would go to the library that was in proximity to where we lived at the time, and just once I asked my father persistently to take me with him to the library.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific library. Also, 'in proximity where we live' is awkward; it should be 'in proximity to where we lived'.

× We went there and since I was a child and I make lots of noises, he took me home very soon and ever since since he never took me to the library again.

✓ We went there and since I was a child and I made lots of noise, he took me home very soon and ever since he has never taken me to the library again.

The verb 'make' should be in the past tense 'made' to match the past context. Also, 'lots of noises' is incorrect; 'lots of noise' is uncountable and should be singular. The phrase 'ever since since' has a repeated 'since' which is incorrect. The verb 'took' should be 'has never taken' to indicate an action continuing up to the present.

× The four kids are not welcome in these libraries.

✓ The children are not welcome in these libraries.

'The four kids' is unclear and likely a typo or incorrect quantifier. 'Kids' is informal; 'children' is more appropriate. Also, if the number is not specific, 'children' is better. The sentence is improved by removing the number 'four' unless it is specific.