Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I often go to the library. It is a quiet place where I can study and reading books without any distraction. And I am also blowing books because it's cheap. Then I buy it.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
I'm usually going to the library to study. You know, it's quite pleased. It helps me focus on my assignment and I meet my study group there sometimes to work on projects together.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
No, I didn't go to library when I were key because my family has a lot of books at home so I need to go to library and when I was a kid I would also like to play outside more.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yeah, Chinese kids often go to the library because it's a quiet place. Have the kids to study and doing homework in the library. And schools encourage students to the library for research.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中有语法错误和用词不当,例如“reading books”应为“read books”,“blowing books”应为“borrowing books”。建议注意动词形式和词汇的准确使用,同时避免句子冗长,保持简洁自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a quiet place where I can study and read books without distractions. I also borrow books from there since it's cheaper than buying them.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,如“I'm usually going”应为“I usually go”,“it's quite pleased”表达不清。建议使用正确的时态和更自然的表达方式,并使用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: I usually go to the library to study because it helps me focus on my assignments. Also, I sometimes meet my study group there to work on projects together.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中有多处语法错误,如“when I were key”应为“when I was a kid”,“I need to go to library”表达不准确。建议注意时态和冠词的使用,句子结构应更清晰。
Ví dụ: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because my family had many books at home. Besides, I preferred playing outside more at that time.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和表达错误,如“Have the kids to study”不正确,句子不连贯。建议使用完整句子,注意动词形式和连接词的使用,使表达更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because it is a quiet place where they can study and do their homework. Moreover, schools encourage students to use the library for research.
× It is a quiet place where I can study and reading books without any distraction.
✓ It is a quiet place where I can study and read books without any distraction.
在can后面应该接动词原形,不能用动名词形式reading。
× And I am also blowing books because it's cheap.
✓ And I also borrow books because it's cheap.
blowing不是正确的动词,应该用borrow表示借书。
× I'm usually going to the library to study.
✓ I usually go to the library to study.
表示习惯动作时,通常用一般现在时,不能用现在进行时。
× You know, it's quite pleased.
✓ You know, it's quite pleasant.
pleased是形容人的情绪,pleasant表示令人愉快的环境,描述图书馆应用pleasant。
× No, I didn't go to library when I were key because my family has a lot of books at home so I need to go to library and when I was a kid I would also like to play outside more.
✓ No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because my family had a lot of books at home so I didn't need to go to the library and when I was a kid I also liked to play outside more.
library前缺少定冠词the;were key应为was a kid;时态应保持一致,过去时用had和didn't need;would like改为liked更符合过去习惯。
× Have the kids to study and doing homework in the library.
✓ Kids have to study and do homework in the library.
句子缺少主语,have to后应接动词原形do,不能用doing。
× And schools encourage students to the library for research.
✓ And schools encourage students to go to the library for research.
encourage后面应接动词不定式go to,而不是直接接名词the library。