Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but to improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and linking words to make your response more coherent and natural. For example, instead of repeating 'library' multiple times, use synonyms or pronouns. Also, adding a linking phrase like 'Moreover' or 'Furthermore' can enhance the flow.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often visit the library because it offers a quiet and peaceful environment that helps me concentrate better. Moreover, I usually use it to read my thesis and work on assignments without distractions. It also provides many useful resources that support my studies.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. To improve, make sure to complete your sentences and avoid grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details. Also, try to avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Ví dụ: When I was at university, I spent a lot of time working on my thesis and searching for academic materials, such as books on philosophy and other students' theses. I found this very beneficial because it helped me avoid distractions and deepen my understanding of the subject.

Gợi ý: Your answer conveys your idea but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. To improve, focus on correct sentence structure and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, try to use more natural expressions and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I rarely went to the library because I found it mundane and tedious. Instead, I preferred lively places like playgrounds and amusement parks where I could have fun with my friends and family.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and clear, but to improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and linking words to make your response more natural and coherent. Also, avoid starting sentences with 'Not really' alone; instead, use a full sentence to answer directly.

Ví dụ: Chinese kids do not often go to libraries because they prefer spending their free time at kids cafes or amusement parks where they can play and have fun. Since libraries are usually quiet places meant for studying, children might find them less exciting.

× I spent a lot of time working at my thesis and searching for academic materials like books related to philosophy and even other senior thesis.

✓ I spent a lot of time working on my thesis and searching for academic materials like books related to philosophy and even other senior theses.

The correct preposition to use with 'work' in this context is 'on' not 'at'. Also, 'thesis' in plural form is 'theses', so 'other senior thesis' should be 'other senior theses'. This correction improves preposition use and plural form accuracy.

× I found it it's really beneficial for me to avoid any.

✓ I found it really beneficial for me to avoid any distractions.

The original sentence is incomplete and contains redundancy ('it it's'). The corrected sentence removes redundancy and completes the thought by adding 'distractions' to clarify what is being avoided.

× When I was a child I rarely went to the library because it it gives me feel mundane and tedious for me and for a child and I prefer the lively places like playgrounds and amusement parks with my close friends or families.

✓ When I was a child, I rarely went to the library because it made me feel mundane and tedious, and I preferred lively places like playgrounds and amusement parks with my close friends or family.

The sentence had repeated words ('it it'), incorrect verb tense ('gives' should be 'made' to match past tense), and awkward phrasing ('gives me feel'). Also, 'families' should be 'family' when referring to one's own family. The correction improves verb tense consistency, removes redundancy, and clarifies meaning.