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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you often go to the library?

Thí sinh

Yes, every day I go to the children's library. It's a new library in Tashkent and I really like this place because I can focus on my study and everyone who surrounds me. They really motivate me because they also focus on their study and of course I have all necessary.

Giám khảo

What do you usually do in the library?

Thí sinh

Well, nowadays mostly I use computer class because my laptop doesn't work. I don't know why that's why I mostly go to the library to use the laptop to use the computer and do their my homework and also I like to read.

Giám khảo

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Thí sinh

Well, I guess I would say no because honestly I can't remember that I was going to the library when I was a kid. That's why my answer no. No, but I can remember that I mostly go to school. I mostly prefer to play outdoors with my friends.

Giám khảo

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Thí sinh

Well, I'm not sure because I don't know the culture of this of Chinese kids, but I can suppose, I suppose that yes, because Chinese, one of the countries that likes disciplines, you know.

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Part 1

Do you often go to the library?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: Javobingiz tabiiy va mazmunli, lekin ba'zi gaplar takrorlanmoqda va grammatik jihatdan yaxshilanishi mumkin. Masalan, 'everyone who surrounds me' o'rniga 'everyone around me' deyish tabiiyroq. Shuningdek, 'I have all necessary' jumlasi to'liq emas, 'I have all the necessary resources' deb to'ldirish kerak.

Ví dụ: Yes, I go to the children's library every day. It's a new library in Tashkent, and I really like it because I can focus on my studies there. Everyone around me is also studying hard, which motivates me. Moreover, the library provides all the necessary resources I need.

What do you usually do in the library?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Javobingizda ma'lumotlar takrorlanmoqda va grammatik xatolar bor. Masalan, 'do their my homework' noto'g'ri. Gaplarni qisqartirish va aniqroq ifodalash kerak. Shuningdek, bog'lovchi so'zlardan foydalanish javobni yaxshilaydi.

Ví dụ: Nowadays, I mostly use the computer class at the library because my laptop is not working. Therefore, I go there to do my homework on the computers. Besides that, I also enjoy reading books in the library.

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: Javobingizda takroriy so'zlar ko'p va gaplar biroz chalkash. Javobni qisqa va aniq qilib, bog'lovchi so'zlardan foydalaning. Masalan, 'I mostly preferred playing outdoors with my friends instead of going to the library' kabi.

Ví dụ: I don't think I went to the library when I was a kid because I can't remember it. Instead, I mostly preferred playing outdoors with my friends after school.

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Javobingizda grammatik xatolar va takroriy so'zlar bor. 'I can suppose' ikki marta ishlatilgan. Gapni aniq va tabiiy qilib ifodalash uchun, bog'lovchi so'zlardan foydalaning va grammatikani yaxshilang.

Ví dụ: I'm not sure because I don't know much about Chinese culture, but I suppose that Chinese kids often go to the library because their country values discipline and education highly.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× I can focus on my study and everyone who surrounds me.

I can focus on my studies and everyone who surrounds me.

The word 'study' should be plural 'studies' because it refers to the general activity of studying, which is countable in this context.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I have all necessary.

I have all the necessary things.

The phrase 'all necessary' is incomplete and lacks a noun. Adding 'the necessary things' clarifies the meaning and corrects the pronoun usage.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I mostly go to the library to use the laptop to use the computer and do their my homework and also I like to read.

I mostly go to the library to use the computer and do my homework, and also I like to read.

The phrase 'their my homework' is incorrect. 'My homework' is the correct possessive pronoun. Also, 'use the laptop to use the computer' is redundant; 'use the computer' suffices.

Past tense issue

× I can't remember that I was going to the library when I was a kid.

I can't remember going to the library when I was a kid.

The phrase 'I was going' is awkward here. Using the gerund 'going' after 'remember' is more natural and grammatically correct.

Present tense issue

× I mostly go to school.

I mostly went to school.

Since the sentence refers to the past ('when I was a kid'), the verb should be in the past tense 'went' instead of present tense 'go'.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I mostly prefer to play outdoors with my friends.

I mostly preferred to play outdoors with my friends.

Again, referring to past habits requires past tense 'preferred' instead of present tense 'prefer'.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I don't know the culture of this of Chinese kids, but I can suppose, I suppose that yes, because Chinese, one of the countries that likes disciplines, you know.

I don't know the culture of Chinese kids, but I suppose that yes, because China is one of the countries that likes discipline, you know.

The phrase 'culture of this of Chinese kids' is incorrect; 'culture of Chinese kids' is correct. Also, 'Chinese' should be 'China' when referring to the country. 'Likes disciplines' should be 'likes discipline' as 'discipline' is uncountable here.

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