Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
I think you know because and for now we have some online apps that we can recall and also the library is quite far away from home, therefore I will not really always go to there to read books.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
Well, I think just reading books because I really only have books only, but sometimes I will try to read some really difficult book because I can get more knowledge from the book and then we can broaden my horizontal.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Well, for this question I think no, because when I was young I don't always go to the library. Actually I will just because I don't have interest in go to the library or for reading books for that period.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
I think no, because there are two reasons. For now the online is very popular and the kids also can read posts from the online library. Therefore it will have the competition. And also for now I think most of them they may go to other places to play games not.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不够自然,表达不清晰,句子结构混乱,缺少连贯性。建议简化句子,直接回答问题,并用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: I don't often go to the library because it is far from my home. Instead, I usually use online apps to read books conveniently.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答内容重复且表达不准确,语法错误较多。建议用简洁的句子表达主要观点,并用连接词丰富内容。
Ví dụ: In the library, I usually read books. Sometimes, I choose difficult books to gain more knowledge and broaden my horizons.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不够直接,语法错误明显,表达不流畅。建议直接回答问题,并用简单句说明原因。
Ví dụ: No, I didn't often go to the library when I was a kid because I was not interested in reading books at that time.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不够具体,表达不连贯,语法错误较多。建议用更清晰的句子表达观点,并提供具体原因。
Ví dụ: I don't think Chinese kids often go to the library because online resources are more popular now. Also, many kids prefer to play games instead of reading books.
× I will not really always go to there to read books.
✓ I will not really always go there to read books.
这里的介词“to”在“go there”中是不需要的,正确表达是直接用“go there”,不加“to”。
× I really only have books only,
✓ I really only have books,
句中“only”重复使用,造成冗余,应去掉一个,使表达更简洁。
× sometimes I will try to read some really difficult book
✓ sometimes I will try to read some really difficult books
“book”应为复数形式“books”,因为前面用了“some”,表示不止一本。
× we can broaden my horizontal.
✓ we can broaden my horizons.
“broaden my horizontal”是不正确的表达,正确短语是“broaden my horizons”,意为“开阔视野”。
× when I was young I don't always go to the library.
✓ when I was young I didn't always go to the library.
描述过去的动作时,助动词应使用过去式“didn't”,而不是现在式“don't”。
× I don't have interest in go to the library
✓ I don't have interest in going to the library
介词“in”后应接动名词形式“going”,而不是动词原形“go”。
× most of them they may go to other places to play games not.
✓ most of them may go to other places to play games.
句中“most of them they”重复使用主语,应去掉其中一个;句尾“not”位置错误,应删除。