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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you often go to the library?

Thí sinh

Yes, I usually go to the library before I have examination or when I want to finish my assignments because library is near my school.

Giám khảo

What do you usually do in the library?

Thí sinh

In the library I usually concentrated on my own tasks or doing some review and also if I don't have any assignments to complete in time I will read some books in the library because the atmosphere there really suitable for me to study it.

Giám khảo

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Thí sinh

Yes, when I was a little child, my mom always takes me to a library in our town and it is a library that's suitable for kids because they have a lot of books that fit kids taste and the library is very nearby our home.

Giám khảo

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Thí sinh

Yes. As for myself, the Chinese kids around me often go to the library because first in China the stress of study on child are very heavy, so they often go to laboratory to do some real work, some review of their school task. And also there has a lot of libraries in China, so it is very popular.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you often go to the library?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答时应注意语法准确性和表达自然流畅。例如,'library is near my school'应改为'the library is near my school'。此外,回答可以更简洁,避免重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually go to the library before exams or when I need to finish assignments because it is close to my school.

What do you usually do in the library?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中时态使用不一致,如'concentrated'应为'concentrate',句子结构较长且不够连贯。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅,并注意语法。

Ví dụ: In the library, I usually concentrate on my tasks or review my lessons. If I don't have urgent assignments, I read books because the atmosphere there is very suitable for studying.

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 回答中时态混用,如'mom always takes'应为'mom always took'。表达可以更简洁,避免重复,并注意冠词使用。

Ví dụ: Yes, when I was a child, my mom always took me to a local library that was suitable for kids because it had many books that children liked and it was very close to our home.

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当,如'stress of study on child are'应为'study pressure on children is','laboratory'应为'library'。建议注意词汇准确性和句子结构,避免重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, Chinese children often go to the library. In China, study pressure on children is quite heavy, so they frequently visit libraries to review their schoolwork. Moreover, there are many libraries across the country, making it a popular place for students.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, I usually go to the library before I have examination or when I want to finish my assignments because library is near my school.

Yes, I usually go to the library before I have an examination or when I want to finish my assignments because the library is near my school.

这里'examination'是可数名词,前面需要加不定冠词'an'。另外,'library'前面缺少定冠词'the',因为这里指特定的图书馆。

Past tense issue

× In the library I usually concentrated on my own tasks or doing some review and also if I don't have any assignments to complete in time I will read some books in the library because the atmosphere there really suitable for me to study it.

In the library I usually concentrate on my own tasks or do some review and also if I don't have any assignments to complete in time I will read some books in the library because the atmosphere there is really suitable for me to study.

'concentrated'应使用一般现在时'concentrate',因为描述的是习惯动作。'doing'应改为'do',保持动词形式一致。'really suitable'前缺少系动词'is'。句尾多余的'it'应删除。

Past tense issue

× Yes, when I was a little child, my mom always takes me to a library in our town and it is a library that's suitable for kids because they have a lot of books that fit kids taste and the library is very nearby our home.

Yes, when I was a little child, my mom always took me to a library in our town and it is a library that's suitable for kids because they have a lot of books that fit kids' taste and the library is very near our home.

描述过去习惯动作时,动词'takes'应改为过去式'took'。'kids taste'应为所有格'kids' taste'。'very nearby our home'表达不正确,应改为'very near our home'。

Singular and plural issue

× Yes. As for myself, the Chinese kids around me often go to the library because first in China the stress of study on child are very heavy, so they often go to laboratory to do some real work, some review of their school task. And also there has a lot of libraries in China, so it is very popular.

Yes. As for myself, the Chinese kids around me often go to the library because first in China the stress of study on children is very heavy, so they often go to the library to do some real work, some review of their school tasks. And also there are a lot of libraries in China, so it is very popular.

'child'应改为复数形式'children'。'stress of study on child are'主谓不一致,应改为'stress of study on children is'。'laboratory'应为'library'。'school task'应为复数'school tasks'。'there has a lot of libraries'应改为'there are a lot of libraries'。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

FitSuitable; Healthy; Equip; Join; Match
HeavyWeighty; Overweight; Forceful; Arduous; Onerous
LittleShort; Young; Brief; Minor
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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