Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and redundant phrases such as 'to sense, uh, to spend some time.' Also, aim to make your answer more concise and clear by directly stating your reasons and using linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library because I need books for my research. Additionally, I enjoy spending time there reading literature and religion books since the environment is very quiet and peaceful.

Gợi ý: Avoid repeating phrases and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific details about your interests and the resources available.

Ví dụ: Usually, I read books about my religion at the library because I am keen to learn more. Moreover, the local library offers many books related to the Sikh religion, which helps me deepen my understanding.

Gợi ý: Try to avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Provide a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details, and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid because my school had one. We had a library class once a week, usually on Wednesdays, and I enjoyed spending time there reading books.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons, using linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: I am not certain, but I believe Chinese kids often go to libraries because schools usually have them. This helps students deepen their knowledge in various subjects and improve their reading skills.

× Sometimes I need to bring some books related to my research and other time I like to, uh, go to the library to sense, uh, to spend some time reading books related to the literature and religion because, uh, the library is very quiet. Quite.

✓ Sometimes I need to bring some books related to my research and other times I like to, uh, go to the library to, uh, spend some time reading books related to literature and religion because, uh, the library is very quiet.

The phrase 'other time' should be 'other times' to correctly express multiple occasions. Also, 'related to the literature and religion' is better as 'related to literature and religion' because 'literature' and 'religion' are general fields and do not require the definite article 'the' here.

× in my home and in my town, the library they offer, they do offer the books related to the related to Sikh religion.

✓ In my home and in my town, the library offers books related to the Sikh religion.

The pronoun 'they' is incorrectly used to refer to 'the library', which is singular. The correct verb form is 'offers' without 'they'. Also, 'the related to the related to Sikh religion' is redundant and should be simplified to 'books related to the Sikh religion'.

× Yes, I went to the library when I was kid because this, uh, because the school that I was enrolled in had a library and we had a, we had one library Class A week.

✓ Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid because the school that I was enrolled in had a library and we had one library class a week.

The phrase 'when I was kid' is missing the article 'a' before 'kid'. Also, 'library Class A week' should be 'library class a week' with proper capitalization and word order.

× It was usually on Wednesdays and we like to spend and we liked to spend some time there reading books about.

✓ It was usually on Wednesdays and we liked to spend some time there reading books.

The phrase 'we like to spend and we liked to spend' is redundant and inconsistent in tense. Since the context is past, 'we liked to spend' is correct. Also, 'reading books about' is incomplete and should be 'reading books'.

× I do not know much about the Chinese kid, but I am pretty sure that they often go to the libraries because they're off.

✓ I do not know much about Chinese kids, but I am pretty sure that they often go to libraries because they're often.

'Chinese kid' should be plural 'Chinese kids' to match 'they'. Also, 'the libraries' can be 'libraries' in general. The phrase 'they're off' seems incomplete or incorrect; it might be intended as 'they're often' or 'they often'.

× The schools also will have the libraries and they and to deepen their knowledge and to deepen their knowledge in a different kind of areas.

✓ Schools also have libraries to help deepen their knowledge in different kinds of areas.

The original sentence is fragmented and repetitive ('they and to deepen their knowledge and to deepen their knowledge'). The corrected sentence simplifies and clarifies the meaning with proper structure and removes redundancy.