Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Ví dụ: I don't often go to the library now because I am working full-time. However, when I was a student, I usually visited the library every week to complete my assignments and study. It was a quiet place that helped me focus better.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good content but lacks coherence and contains grammatical mistakes. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific. Also, avoid repeating words and keep sentences clear and natural.

Ví dụ: In the library, I usually read books and conduct research for my assignments or projects. Additionally, I sometimes use the computers there because they allow me to find information more quickly than reading books.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Provide a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details with linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and redundancy.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to the library when I was a kid because my parents encouraged me to read. My mother, who was a teacher, often told me that visiting the library would help me learn more and develop good habits.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid grammatical mistakes and incomplete thoughts.

Ví dụ: Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library to complete their school projects and activities. Research shows that libraries are popular places for students in China to study and access resources.

× No, no, I didn't go to the library for how many years 'cause I already working right now, so I don't have anything to do with activity in the library.

✓ No, no, I haven't gone to the library for many years because I am already working right now, so I don't have any activities to do in the library.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the simple past tense 'didn't go' to describe an action continuing up to the present, which requires the present perfect tense 'haven't gone'. Also, 'already working' lacks the auxiliary verb 'am'. The phrase 'anything to do with activity' is awkward and should be 'any activities to do'. Using present perfect and correct verb forms improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× But when I was studying, yes, probably.

✓ But when I was studying, yes, I probably did.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb to complete the thought. Adding 'I probably did' clarifies the meaning and completes the sentence in past tense, matching the context of 'when I was studying'.

× I usually went to library every week to do my assignments, activities and lots of.

✓ I usually went to the library every week to do my assignments, activities, and lots more.

The phrase 'went to library' is missing the definite article 'the'. Also, 'lots of' is incomplete and should be 'lots more' or 'a lot more' to be grammatically correct. Adding commas improves readability.

× To the library, I usually read a lot of books when when I was in the library or do some research about our assignments or projects.

✓ In the library, I usually read a lot of books or do some research on our assignments or projects when I was there.

The preposition 'To the library' is incorrect here; 'In the library' is appropriate to indicate location. Also, 'research about' should be 'research on'. The sentence is reordered for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× And also sometimes I use the computers inside of the room so that I could research things more easily and faster than reading a books either like.

✓ Also, sometimes I use the computers inside the room so that I can research things more easily and faster than reading books.

The phrase 'inside of the room' is better as 'inside the room'. 'Could' is changed to 'can' to match present tense. 'Reading a books' is incorrect; 'books' is plural and should not have 'a'. The sentence is simplified for clarity.

× Lovely yes, I love to go to the library when I was a kid and usually my parents influenced me to go to the library.

✓ Yes, I loved to go to the library when I was a kid, and usually my parents encouraged me to go to the library.

The verb 'love' should be in past tense 'loved' to match 'when I was a kid'. 'Influenced me to go' is awkward; 'encouraged me to go' is more natural. The word 'Lovely' is unnecessary and removed for clarity.

× They also loved to read books a lot and my mother was a teacher during that time so she told me to to go to the library and.

✓ They also loved to read books a lot, and my mother was a teacher during that time, so she told me to go to the library.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and.' Removing the extra 'to' and completing the sentence improves clarity. Commas are added for proper sentence structure.

× Particularly there's the research that telling Chinese kids are more often went to the library to do their activities and and other school projects.

✓ Particularly, there is research that shows Chinese kids more often go to the library to do their activities and other school projects.

'There's the research that telling' is incorrect; it should be 'there is research that shows'. 'Are more often went' mixes present and past tense incorrectly; it should be 'more often go'. Removing duplicate 'and' and correcting verb tenses improves grammatical accuracy.