Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
No, I often go to the teach buildings. I think it's also a good way to study rather than library.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
Most of the time I will study at laboratory and also I will do some readings because I think learning is a good hobbies in daily time.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Actually I should talk no, because when I was a child there is no library in my living town, so I have not conditions to this.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, so many Chinese kids will go to the library for learning because it's a rivalry society. Kids need to learn more to suit for the rival competitions.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,建议使用更准确的词汇和句式表达自己的观点,同时避免重复和冗余。
Ví dụ: No, I usually study in the teaching buildings because I find them more convenient and quiet than the library.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够清晰,建议简洁明了地回答问题,并使用恰当的词汇和句式。
Ví dụ: I usually study in the laboratory and read books because I enjoy learning during my free time.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答语法错误严重,表达不流畅,建议使用简单句子直接回答问题,并说明原因。
Ví dụ: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a child because there was no library in my town.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中词汇使用不准确,表达不自然,建议使用更合适的词汇和句式来描述情况。
Ví dụ: Yes, many Chinese children often go to the library to study because education is very competitive in China.
× No, I often go to the teach buildings.
✓ No, I often go to the teaching buildings.
这里的'teach buildings'应为'teaching buildings',因为'teach'是动词原形,作为形容词修饰名词时应使用动名词形式。
× I think it's also a good way to study rather than library.
✓ I think it's also a good way to study rather than the library.
'rather than'后面应接名词短语,且'library'前应加定冠词'the',表示特指图书馆。
× Most of the time I will study at laboratory and also I will do some readings because I think learning is a good hobbies in daily time.
✓ Most of the time I will study at the laboratory and also I will do some reading because I think learning is a good hobby in daily time.
'laboratory'前应加定冠词'the';'readings'应为不可数名词'reading';'hobbies'应为单数'hobby',因为前面有不定冠词'a'。
× Actually I should talk no, because when I was a child there is no library in my living town, so I have not conditions to this.
✓ Actually I should say no, because when I was a child there was no library in my hometown, so I did not have the conditions for this.
'should talk no'应为'should say no';'there is no'应改为过去时'there was no';'living town'应为'hometown';'have not conditions'应为'did not have the conditions';'to this'应为'for this'。
× Yes, so many Chinese kids will go to the library for learning because it's a rivalry society.
✓ Yes, many Chinese kids will go to the library for learning because it's a competitive society.
'so many'在此处多余,改为'many'更自然;'rivalry society'表达不当,应为'competitive society'。
× Kids need to learn more to suit for the rival competitions.
✓ Kids need to learn more to suit the rival competitions.
动词'suit'后不需要介词'for',直接接宾语即可。