Library— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I usually go to the library to study or read books. I mean, libraries offer you a wide range of books that you that you can't find at any bookstores. And I also find the quiet atmosphere in the library beneficial to me.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
I usually study or read books in the library because libraries offer you a wide range of books that you can't find at any bookstores, and that diversity really keeps me engaged.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Well, no, I didn't, because there wasn't. There weren't any near or convenient one near my house, so if I wanted to get to a library, I would have to travel quite a distance.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Well, I think kinda usually because Chinese parents usually put a lot of expectations on their kids and then they push them to study harder and harder, and that's why Chinese kids have to go to the library very often.
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Part 1
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và hiệu quả, tuy nhiên có sự lặp lại cụm từ "that you" và câu trả lời hơi dài dòng. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn để tăng tính mạch lạc.
Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library to study and read because it offers a wide variety of books that are not available in bookstores. Moreover, the quiet environment helps me concentrate better.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Bạn trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng câu trả lời có phần lặp lại ý với câu trước và chưa sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý một cách mạch lạc. Hãy tránh lặp ý và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
Ví dụ: In the library, I usually study or read books since it provides a diverse selection that I can't find elsewhere, which helps me stay interested.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng và có cấu trúc tốt, tuy nhiên có một chút lặp từ và câu hơi dài. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và chia câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
Ví dụ: No, I didn't go to the library as a child because there wasn't a convenient one near my house. I would have had to travel a long distance to get there.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chính thức như "kinda" và lặp từ "usually" nhiều lần. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và sử dụng liên từ để mạch lạc.
Ví dụ: Yes, Chinese children often go to the library because their parents have high expectations and encourage them to study hard, so visiting the library frequently is common.
Ngữ pháp
× Well, no, I didn't, because there wasn't. There weren't any near or convenient one near my house, so if I wanted to get to a library, I would have to travel quite a distance.
✓ Well, no, I didn't, because there wasn't a convenient one near my house, so if I wanted to get to a library, I would have to travel quite a distance.
The phrase 'there wasn't. There weren't any near or convenient one' is incorrect because 'there weren't any' is plural while 'one' is singular. The correct form is 'there wasn't a convenient one' to match the singular noun 'one'. This is a 'There be issue' related to singular/plural agreement in existential sentences.
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