Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Sure, I often go to the library because I'm very busy university student, I have to learn about more advanced information on the Internet, so I want a quiet place to study. So I think the library is a suitable place for me.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
I really do some coding, use my computer in the library and I often read some paper for learn about the advanced technology. About my major, yes, and my major is computer science, so I think it's good for me.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Probably not. Yeah. When I was a kid, I often went to the park to play and I often playing. I played outside. I didn't like. I like studying, yes. So I think I don't go to the library.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Probably not. Yeah, because Chinese kids prefer play playing outside, such as they prefer swimming, reading and the study pressure is not heavy, so they have more time to play with their friends.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答时语法和表达不够自然,句子结构较为混乱,建议简化句子并注意时态和冠词的使用,同时避免重复表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library because I am a busy university student and need a quiet place to study. I usually look for advanced information online, so the library helps me focus.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够连贯,建议使用连接词使句子更流畅,并且注意名词单复数和动词形式的正确使用。
Ví dụ: In the library, I usually do coding on my computer and read papers about advanced technology related to my major, computer science. This helps me improve my knowledge.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答表达混乱,时态使用不当,句子不完整,建议理清思路,使用完整句子并注意时态一致。
Ví dụ: No, I didn't often go to the library when I was a kid. I preferred playing outside in the park because I enjoyed outdoor activities more than studying.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清,建议使用更准确的词汇和句式,避免重复,并且使句子结构更完整。
Ví dụ: Probably not. Chinese kids usually prefer playing outside, like swimming or other activities. Since their study pressure is not very heavy, they have more time to play with friends.
× I'm very busy university student
✓ I'm a very busy university student
这里缺少冠词'a',因为'university student'是单数可数名词,前面需要加不定冠词。
× I often playing
✓ I often play
'often'后面应接动词原形,不能用动名词形式'playing'。
× I often read some paper for learn about the advanced technology
✓ I often read some papers to learn about advanced technology
'paper'应为复数形式'papers',且'for learn'应改为'to learn',表示目的。
× Chinese kids prefer play playing outside
✓ Chinese kids prefer playing outside
'prefer'后面应接动名词形式,且不需要重复'play'。
× such as they prefer swimming, reading and the study pressure is not heavy
✓ such as swimming, reading, and the study pressure is not heavy
'such as'后面直接列举活动,不需要再加主语和谓语。