Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
With the Internet, libraries are not as popular as they used to be before because most of the information we normally get from the library, we can have them on the Internet. I can remember going to the library two years ago, but since then I haven't had the opportunity or the time to go to the library.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
People have various reasons to visit the library. I normally go to the library for my assignments. When given difficult assignments, I go to the library because I know there I'm going to have the answer to the question because we have research being stored at the library, past questions and textbooks we.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
I never had the opportunity to visit the library when I was a kid, but right now I have that opportunity to visit the library due to my age and the fact that I am currently working.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
I can not really tell if Chinese kids go more often to the library. This is not a country I'm versed with, but in my opinion I think they go frequently to the library. Looking at the various invention China though.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: You fit well the answer but try to be more concise and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, start with a direct answer to the question before explaining. For example, say "No, I don't often go to the library because..." to make your response clearer and more natural.
Ví dụ: No, I don't often go to the library because most information is now available online. The last time I visited was two years ago, but since then, I haven't had the chance due to my busy schedule.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and unclear at the end. Try to organize your ideas with linking words and be more specific. For example, say "I usually go to the library to find textbooks, past exam papers, and research materials that help me complete difficult assignments."
Ví dụ: I usually go to the library to find textbooks, past exam papers, and research materials. These resources help me complete difficult assignments more effectively.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but could be improved by adding a linking word and a bit more detail. For example, start with "No, I didn't go to the library as a kid because..." and then explain why you can go now.
Ví dụ: No, I didn't go to the library as a kid because there wasn't one nearby. However, now that I am older and working, I have the opportunity to visit it regularly.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Your answer is honest but lacks clarity and coherence. Avoid vague phrases like "I'm not versed with" and incomplete thoughts. Try to give a clear opinion with reasons. For example, "I am not sure, but I think Chinese kids visit libraries often because education is highly valued in China."
Ví dụ: I am not sure, but I think Chinese kids visit libraries often because education is highly valued in China and many schools encourage reading.
× I normally go to the library for my assignments. When given difficult assignments, I go to the library because I know there I'm going to have the answer to the question because we have research being stored at the library, past questions and textbooks we.
✓ I normally go to the library for my assignments. When given difficult assignments, I go to the library because I know there I'm going to have the answer to the question because we have research stored at the library, past questions and textbooks.
The phrase 'research being stored' is incorrect here. The correct form is 'research stored' because 'stored' functions as a past participle adjective describing 'research'. Using 'being stored' implies an ongoing action which is unnecessary and awkward in this context.