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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you often go to the library?

Thí sinh

Yes, especially before the final exams. Well, I need to go to the library to review my knowledge, my professional knowledge.

Giám khảo

What do you usually do in the library?

Thí sinh

Well, I always learn professional knowledge in the library. However, in some spare time I will read some novels in the library.

Giám khảo

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Thí sinh

Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid. Well, it's a great place for me to finish my homework and after accomplishing my homework I could read some anime.

Giám khảo

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think so because, you know, trans parents pay attention to the children's grades. So a lot of most of parents think it's a great place to cultivate their habits to learn.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you often go to the library?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答时应避免重复表达,如“my knowledge, my professional knowledge”显得冗余。可以更自然地表达去图书馆的目的,并适当丰富细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library, especially before final exams, to review my major subjects and prepare thoroughly.

What do you usually do in the library?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答中“learn professional knowledge”表达不够地道,建议用更自然的表达方式。同时,连接词使用得当,但可以更具体说明读什么类型的小说。

Ví dụ: I usually study my major subjects in the library, but during breaks, I enjoy reading fiction novels to relax.

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答中“read some anime”表达不准确,应改为“read manga”或“look at comic books”。句子结构可以更流畅,避免重复“homework”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I used to go to the library as a child. It was a quiet place where I could finish my homework and then enjoy reading manga.

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清,如“trans parents”应为“parents”。句子结构混乱,建议简化并用更准确的表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, many Chinese parents encourage their children to go to the library because they believe it helps develop good study habits and improve grades.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× So a lot of most of parents think it's a great place to cultivate their habits to learn.

So a lot of parents think it's a great place to cultivate their habits to learn.

句中“a lot of most of parents”中“a lot of”和“most of”都表示大量,不能同时使用,且“parents”是复数,前面不需要两个限定词叠加,正确用法是“a lot of parents”或“most parents”。建议去掉其中一个限定词,使表达简洁准确。

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