Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, I go to the library once a week and I also go to library study.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
I usually go to library read books because I think in the library it has many books can I read. And I usually go to library study because in the library it's quiet.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
No, I didn't usually go to the library when I were a kid because when I were a kid I think library is boring. I think garden is more interesting than library.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think Chinese kids often go to the library because I think Chinese kids are like reading books in the library and in China they are a lot of libraries. It is convenient.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答时应避免重复表达,如“go to the library”和“go to library study”意思重复。可以合并表达,且句子结构需更自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually visit the library once a week to study and read books.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,句子不够连贯。应使用连接词使表达更流畅,并注意语法正确。
Ví dụ: I usually read books in the library because it has a wide variety of books. Moreover, I like to study there since it is very quiet.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 时态和主谓一致错误较多,表达不自然。应注意时态一致,句子结构清晰。
Ví dụ: No, I didn't often go to the library when I was a kid because I thought it was boring. I preferred playing in the garden, which was more interesting to me.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 表达重复且语法错误较多。应避免重复“think”,并使用更准确的表达方式。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe many Chinese children often visit libraries because there are many libraries in China, making it convenient for them to read books there.
× I also go to library study.
✓ I also go to the library to study.
这里缺少定冠词'the',因为特指图书馆,应该使用'the library'。
× I usually go to library read books because I think in the library it has many books can I read.
✓ I usually go to the library to read books because I think there are many books I can read in the library.
缺少定冠词'the',并且句子结构不正确,应该使用'the library',并调整句子使其通顺。
× And I usually go to library study because in the library it's quiet.
✓ And I usually go to the library to study because it is quiet there.
缺少定冠词'the',应该是'the library',并且表达更自然。
× No, I didn't usually go to the library when I were a kid because when I were a kid I think library is boring.
✓ No, I didn't usually go to the library when I was a kid because when I was a kid I thought the library was boring.
过去时态中,主语是第一人称单数,应该用'was'而不是'were',并且动词时态要一致。
× No, I didn't usually go to the library when I were a kid because when I were a kid I think library is boring.
✓ No, I didn't usually go to the library when I was a kid because when I was a kid I thought the library was boring.
缺少定冠词'the',应该是'the library'。
× I think garden is more interesting than library.
✓ I think the garden is more interesting than the library.
这里指特定的花园和图书馆,应该使用定冠词'the'。
× No, I didn't usually go to the library when I were a kid because when I were a kid I think library is boring.
✓ No, I didn't usually go to the library when I was a kid because when I was a kid I thought the library was boring.
主语是第一人称单数,过去时态中应该用'was',而不是'were'。
× I think Chinese kids are like reading books in the library and in China they are a lot of libraries.
✓ I think Chinese kids like reading books in the library and in China there are a lot of libraries.
'are like'用法错误,应该是'like'表示喜欢;'they are a lot of libraries'结构错误,应该是'there are a lot of libraries'。
× I think Chinese kids are like reading books in the library and in China they are a lot of libraries.
✓ I think Chinese kids like reading books in the library and in China there are a lot of libraries.
缺少定冠词'the',应该是'the library'。