Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Not I think library is not suit for me. I can study at home or at cafe.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
Actually at most of the time I spend time to play in my phone but not to reboot, so I really don't like go to the library.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Yes, my mother often bring me there when I was a child. She think maybe it can require more technology from library.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
For sure umm, most of Chinese families think library is a good place to study according knowledge and so on and it's also a good place to study.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 你的回答语法错误较多,表达不够自然。建议使用完整句子,直接回答问题,并简洁说明原因。
Ví dụ: No, I don't often go to the library because I find it more comfortable to study at home or in a cafe.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰,语法和表达有误。建议直接回答问题,并用连接词补充细节,使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Usually, I try to study in the library, but sometimes I get distracted by my phone, so I don't enjoy going there very much.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 语法错误较多,表达不清晰。建议用正确时态和句式,清楚说明过去的情况和原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, my mother often took me to the library when I was a child because she believed it would help me learn more.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答重复且表达不流畅。建议简洁明了地表达观点,并用具体理由支持。
Ví dụ: Yes, many Chinese families believe that libraries are good places for children to study and gain knowledge.
× Not I think library is not suit for me.
✓ No, I think the library is not suitable for me.
句子结构不正确,缺少主语和谓语的正确顺序。应使用完整句子表达否定意见,并且'suit'应改为形容词'suitable'。建议学习英语句子的基本结构,主语+谓语+宾语。
× Not I think library is not suit for me.
✓ No, I think the library is not suitable for me.
'suit'是动词,句中需要形容词'suitable'来修饰名词。中文中形容词和动词的区别不明显,英语中要注意形容词和动词的正确使用。
× Not I think library is not suit for me.
✓ No, I think the library is not suitable for me.
'library'前缺少定冠词'the',因为这里指特定的图书馆。英语中单数可数名词前通常需要冠词。
× I can study at home or at cafe.
✓ I can study at home or at a cafe.
'cafe'前缺少不定冠词'a',因为这里指的是某个咖啡馆。英语中单数可数名词前需要冠词。
× Actually at most of the time I spend time to play in my phone but not to reboot, so I really don't like go to the library.
✓ Actually, most of the time I spend playing on my phone but not reading, so I really don't like going to the library.
'spend time to play'应改为'spend time playing',动词后接动名词。'play in my phone'应为'playing on my phone',介词错误。'not to reboot'不合适,推测想表达'not reading'。'don't like go'应为'don't like going',动词后接动名词。
× Actually at most of the time I spend time to play in my phone but not to reboot, so I really don't like go to the library.
✓ Actually, most of the time I spend playing on my phone but not reading, so I really don't like going to the library.
介词'on'用于表示使用电子设备,'in'不正确。
× Actually at most of the time I spend time to play in my phone but not to reboot, so I really don't like go to the library.
✓ Actually, most of the time I spend playing on my phone but not reading, so I really don't like going to the library.
动词'spend'后应接动名词形式,'to play'应改为'playing'。
× Yes, my mother often bring me there when I was a child.
✓ Yes, my mother often brought me there when I was a child.
句子描述过去的动作,动词应使用过去式。'bring'的过去式是'brought'。
× She think maybe it can require more technology from library.
✓ She thinks maybe the library can provide more technology.
主语是第三人称单数,动词应加's'。'it'指代不明确,应改为'the library'。'require'用法不当,应改为'provide'。
× She think maybe it can require more technology from library.
✓ She thinks maybe the library can provide more technology.
'from library'不合适,应该用'the library'作为主语或宾语。
× She think maybe it can require more technology from library.
✓ She thinks maybe the library can provide more technology.
主语是第三人称单数,动词'think'应加's'变为'thinks'。
× For sure umm, most of Chinese families think library is a good place to study according knowledge and so on and it's also a good place to study.
✓ For sure, most Chinese families think the library is a good place to study according to knowledge and so on, and it's also a good place to study.
'most of Chinese families'应为'most Chinese families','library'前应加定冠词'the'。
× For sure umm, most of Chinese families think library is a good place to study according knowledge and so on and it's also a good place to study.
✓ For sure, most Chinese families think the library is a good place to study according to knowledge and so on, and it's also a good place to study.
'according knowledge'应为'according to knowledge',介词使用错误。