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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you often go to the library?

Thí sinh

Certainly, yes. I often go to library for study. Can I go to library not only for academic books, but also to help me improve my study in schools, and the quiet environment in library lets me calm down.

Giám khảo

What do you usually do in the library?

Thí sinh

I usually study and read books in the library. Study in the library is among the things for me, as is quiet, and reading books is always my choice.

Giám khảo

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Thí sinh

I definitely went to the library when I was a kid. Going to library is a marvelous things for me as I can. I like to read comic books, story books and so on in the library when I were a kid.

Giám khảo

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Thí sinh

Certainly as Chinese kids always go to library to boost their study and it is useful for their study in future, so Chinese kids often go to the library also to broaden their horizon.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you often go to the library?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“Can I go to library”应为“I can go to the library”。建议注意冠词的使用,并使句子更简洁自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library to study. I use it not only to find academic books but also to enjoy the quiet environment, which helps me concentrate better.

What do you usually do in the library?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达不够清晰,句子结构混乱,缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用更自然的表达,并用连接词使句子流畅。

Ví dụ: I usually study and read books in the library because it is quiet and helps me focus. Reading is one of my favorite activities there.

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 语法错误较多,如“a marvelous things”应为“a marvelous thing”,“when I were”应为“when I was”。建议加强时态和单复数的正确使用。

Ví dụ: Yes, I definitely went to the library when I was a kid. I enjoyed reading comic books and storybooks there, which made learning fun for me.

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 句子过长且缺少适当的标点,表达不够简洁。建议分句表达,并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library to improve their studies. It is also a good place for them to broaden their horizons.

Ngữ pháp

Article errors

× I often go to library for study.

I often go to the library for study.

这里缺少定冠词“the”,因为“library”是特指的场所,应该用“the library”。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Can I go to library not only for academic books, but also to help me improve my study in schools, and the quiet environment in library lets me calm down.

I go to the library not only for academic books, but also to help me improve my studies in school, and the quiet environment in the library lets me calm down.

“go to library”缺少定冠词“the”;“improve my study in schools”中“study”应为复数“studies”,且“in schools”应为单数“in school”;“in library”缺少定冠词“the”。

Article errors

× I usually study and read books in the library.

I usually study and read books in the library.

该句无错误,保持原句。

Sentence structure errors

× Study in the library is among the things for me, as is quiet, and reading books is always my choice.

Studying in the library is one of the things I like, as it is quiet, and reading books is always my choice.

原句结构混乱,缺少主谓一致和逻辑连接,需调整为“Studying in the library is one of the things I like, as it is quiet”以表达正确意思。

Article errors

× I definitely went to the library when I was a kid.

I definitely went to the library when I was a kid.

该句无错误,保持原句。

Singular and plural issue

× Going to library is a marvelous things for me as I can.

Going to the library is a marvelous thing for me.

“library”前缺少定冠词“the”;“things”应为单数“thing”,因为前面用的是“a marvelous”。

Past tense issue

× I like to read comic books, story books and so on in the library when I were a kid.

I liked to read comic books, story books and so on in the library when I was a kid.

“like”应使用过去时“liked”,因为描述过去的习惯;“I were”应为“I was”,主语“I”用单数过去式。

Article errors

× Certainly as Chinese kids always go to library to boost their study and it is useful for their study in future, so Chinese kids often go to the library also to broaden their horizon.

Certainly, Chinese kids always go to the library to boost their studies, and it is useful for their studies in the future, so Chinese kids often go to the library also to broaden their horizons.

“go to library”缺少定冠词“the”;“study”应为复数“studies”;“in future”应为“in the future”;“horizon”应为复数“horizons”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

QuietSilent; Soft; Peaceful; Unobtrusive
UsefulFunctional; Beneficial
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