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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you often go to the library?

Thí sinh

Yeah, I go to the Public Library regularly and I often doing something like reading some references because I can study there without any distractions.

Giám khảo

What do you usually do in the library?

Thí sinh

Frequently I do some stuff like reading some books such as the novels and science fictions or just relax and escape from the busy schedule.

Giám khảo

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Thí sinh

No, actually not at all 'cause when I was a kid I tended to do something like playing the video games or just stuff like that instead of studying the library.

Giám khảo

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Thí sinh

Yeah, I'd say compared to those foreign kids, Chinese kids have a really severe and greater stress. So they started to go to the library to study and to reading.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you often go to the library?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“doing”应为“do”,且表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式,并避免冗余。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the public library because it's a quiet place where I can focus on my studies without distractions.

What do you usually do in the library?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中“do some stuff”表达不够正式,且“science fictions”应为“science fiction”。建议使用更准确和正式的词汇,并且句子结构更清晰。

Ví dụ: I usually read novels and science fiction books, or sometimes I just relax to take a break from my busy schedule.

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不够准确,如“playing the video games”应为“playing video games”,且“studying the library”表达错误。建议使用更准确的表达并简洁回答。

Ví dụ: No, I didn't go to the library as a child because I preferred playing video games and other activities instead of studying.

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,如“to reading”应为“to read”,且表达不够连贯。建议使用更准确的语法和连接词,使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, Chinese children often go to the library because they face more academic pressure compared to foreign kids, so they use the library to study and read.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× Yeah, I go to the Public Library regularly and I often doing something like reading some references because I can study there without any distractions.

Yeah, I go to the Public Library regularly and I often do something like reading some references because I can study there without any distractions.

动词后面不能直接接动名词doing,应该用动词原形do。这里的often后面需要用动词原形do,而不是doing。

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× Frequently I do some stuff like reading some books such as the novels and science fictions or just relax and escape from the busy schedule.

Frequently I do some stuff like reading some books such as novels and science fiction or just relax and escape from the busy schedule.

“the novels”和“science fictions”用法不当。小说和科幻小说作为类别名词,不需要冠词the,且science fiction是不可数名词,不用复数形式。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× No, actually not at all 'cause when I was a kid I tended to do something like playing the video games or just stuff like that instead of studying the library.

No, actually not at all 'cause when I was a kid I tended to do something like playing video games or just stuff like that instead of studying in the library.

“studying the library”缺少介词,应为“studying in the library”,表示在图书馆学习。

Verb + -ing form

× Yeah, I'd say compared to those foreign kids, Chinese kids have a really severe and greater stress. So they started to go to the library to study and to reading.

Yeah, I'd say compared to those foreign kids, Chinese kids have really severe and greater stress. So they started to go to the library to study and to read.

动词不定式to后面应接动词原形,不能用动名词reading,应改为read。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BusyOccupied; Unavailable; Hectic
ForeignOverseas; Unfamiliar
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