Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to make your sentences clearer and more natural by correcting grammar and avoiding redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

Ví dụ: I rarely go to the library because it's far from my house and I don't have much free time. Instead, I prefer reading PDF books on my computer.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more formal linking words and avoiding informal contractions like 'cause'. Also, try to add a bit more detail to make your answer richer and more coherent.

Ví dụ: Usually, I choose my favorite book, sit at a desk, and start reading. I mostly prefer detective stories because they are very interesting and engaging for me.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid repetition. Also, provide a clear and coherent response with linking words to improve flow.

Ví dụ: When I was a kid in the 90s, there was no library in my city. Therefore, I used to read books at home, which my mom always gave me.

Gợi ý: It's better to answer the question as much as you can instead of saying you don't know. You can give a general opinion or say what you have heard. Also, improve sentence structure and avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: I am not sure about Chinese kids, but I think many children around the world often go to libraries to study and read books.

× I rarely go to the library because it's far from my house and I don't have much time to go to library prefer, although I prefer PDF books.

✓ I rarely go to the library because it's far from my house and I don't have much time to go to the library, although I prefer PDF books.

The phrase 'go to library prefer' is incorrect because it lacks the definite article 'the' before 'library' and has an extra word 'prefer' misplaced. The correct phrase is 'go to the library'. Also, 'prefer' should be connected properly to the sentence. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and uses the correct preposition and article.

× I rarely go to the library because it's far from my house and I don't have much time to go to library prefer, although I prefer PDF books.

✓ I rarely go to the library because it's far from my house and I don't have much time to go to the library; however, I prefer PDF books.

The original sentence incorrectly combines ideas with 'although' and a misplaced 'prefer'. Using a semicolon and 'however' properly connects the contrasting ideas. This improves sentence structure and clarity.

× Usually I choose my favorite book, sit at the desk and start reading.

✓ Usually I choose my favorite book, sit at a desk, and start reading.

The phrase 'sit at the desk' implies a specific desk known to both speaker and listener, which may not be the case. Using 'a desk' is more appropriate when referring to any desk in the library. Also, adding a comma before 'and' improves readability.

× Mostly I prefer to read detective stories 'cause it's very interesting for me and engaging.

✓ Mostly I prefer to read detective stories because they are very interesting and engaging to me.

The pronoun 'it' incorrectly refers to 'detective stories', which is plural. The correct pronoun is 'they'. Also, 'cause' is informal; 'because' is more appropriate in this context.

× When I was a kid, it wasn't any library in my city because it was 90s.

✓ When I was a kid, there wasn't any library in my city because it was the 90s.

The phrase 'it wasn't any library' is incorrect. The correct structure uses 'there wasn't any library' to indicate the absence of something. Also, 'the 90s' requires the definite article 'the'.

× My mom, always my mom used to give me books.

✓ My mom, always, used to give me books.

The phrase 'always my mom' is awkward and redundant. Placing 'always' after 'my mom' and setting it off with commas improves clarity and flow. The past tense 'used to give' is correct.

× I have no any idea if Chinese kids often go to the library because I live in Georgia in Tbilisi so I have never been to China so I can't answer on this question.

✓ I have no idea if Chinese kids often go to the library because I live in Tbilisi, Georgia, and I have never been to China, so I can't answer this question.

The phrase 'no any idea' is incorrect; 'no idea' is correct. Also, 'answer on this question' should be 'answer this question'. Commas improve sentence clarity.