Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually visit the libraries to study. It's a quiet place which helps me focus on my homework.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
I usually go to the libraries to study. It's a quiet place there which helps me focus on my assignments. I also meet my study groups to work together to finish some projects.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
I usually went to the libraries when I was a child. My parents took me to the libraries every weekend. I liked finding new books and stories, and it was a good place to do my homework.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
No, not all kids like going to the libraries. Many young children prefer reading ebooks or using online resources, and some children prefer other activities.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答较为简洁且自然,但可以避免重复使用“libraries”,并且可以增加一些具体细节来丰富内容。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library because it's a peaceful environment that helps me concentrate on my homework and prepare for exams.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较丰富,但开头重复了前一个问题的内容,建议直接回答问题并使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: In the library, I usually study quietly because it helps me concentrate. Additionally, I often meet with my study group there to collaborate on projects.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 90.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且结构清晰,但“libraries”复数使用略显重复,可以适当调整表达使语言更自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often visited the library as a child. My parents took me there every weekend, and I enjoyed discovering new books and doing my homework in a quiet environment.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答观点明确,但可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯,同时增加具体例子使内容更丰富。
Ví dụ: Not all Chinese children often go to the library because many prefer reading ebooks or using online resources. Moreover, some kids enjoy other activities like playing sports or video games.
× Yes, I usually visit the libraries to study.
✓ Yes, I usually visit the library to study.
libraries 是复数形式,但这里指的是一般去图书馆,通常用单数形式 library 表示某个场所。
× I usually go to the libraries to study.
✓ I usually go to the library to study.
同上,libraries 应改为单数形式 library,表示一般去图书馆。
× It's a quiet place there which helps me focus on my assignments.
✓ It's a quiet place which helps me focus on my assignments.
there 在此句中多余,影响句子流畅,应去掉。
× I also meet my study groups to work together to finish some projects.
✓ I also meet my study group to work together to finish some projects.
study groups 是复数,但通常指一个学习小组,使用单数形式 study group 更合适。
× I usually went to the libraries when I was a child.
✓ I usually went to the library when I was a child.
libraries 应改为单数形式 library,表示过去常去的图书馆。
× My parents took me to the libraries every weekend.
✓ My parents took me to the library every weekend.
libraries 应改为单数形式 library,表示每个周末去的图书馆。
× No, not all kids like going to the libraries.
✓ No, not all kids like going to the library.
libraries 应改为单数形式 library,表示一般的图书馆。