Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but a bit long and repetitive. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, start with a direct answer, then explain with specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'as'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library because it has all the study materials I need. Moreover, the quiet environment helps me concentrate better on my subjects.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using more varied vocabulary and clearer linking words. Also, avoid redundancy like 'read books' and 'read the pages'. Try to give specific examples or reasons to enrich your answer.

Ví dụ: Usually, I read different books in the library because it offers a wide range of resources. This peaceful setting allows me to focus and learn about new topics effectively.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be more concise and structured. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas logically. Also, avoid repeating 'library' too many times; use pronouns or synonyms.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't visit a library as a child because there wasn't one near my home. I had a friend who often went there, and I felt envious since I never had the chance to experience it.

Gợi ý: Your answer is honest and clear, which is good. To improve, you can make it more concise and use linking words to make it sound more natural. For example, start with your lack of knowledge, then explain why.

Ví dụ: I don't know much about Chinese kids visiting libraries because I'm from India and only familiar with children here.

× Yes, I love to go to the library. It is because I am able to find all my study material there and each and every book is available in the library and also the place is very quiet so I am able to concentrate more on the subject or any book which I am.

✓ Yes, I love to go to the library because I am able to find all my study material there. Each and every book is available in the library, and the place is very quiet, so I am able to concentrate more on the subject or any book I am reading.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence with multiple ideas joined improperly. Breaking it into shorter sentences improves clarity and grammatical correctness. Also, 'which I am' is incomplete and should be 'I am reading' to complete the thought.

× In the library, I like to read books as I'm able to find every book of my need there and I sit there peacefully and read the pages and it helps me to enhance my knowledge about various new topics.

✓ In the library, I like to read books as I'm able to find every book I need there. I sit peacefully and read the pages, which helps me enhance my knowledge about various new topics.

The phrase 'every book of my need' is incorrect; it should be 'every book I need'. Also, the sentence is long and can be split for clarity. 'Helps me to enhance' can be simplified to 'helps me enhance'.

× No, I never visited a library when I was a kid. It is because there was not a single library near me and I had a friend who often visited library and I was very envious of her as I never got a chance to visit a library in my childhood.

✓ No, I never visited a library when I was a kid because there was not a single library near me. I had a friend who often visited the library, and I was very envious of her as I never got a chance to visit a library in my childhood.

The phrase 'visited library' is missing the article 'the' before 'library'. Also, 'It is because' is better replaced with 'because' to connect the ideas properly.

× I actually have no clue about it as I'm from India and I only know about the students or the children living here and I don't have any knowledge regarding the Chinese students.

✓ I actually have no clue about it as I'm from India, and I only know about the students or children living here. I don't have any knowledge regarding Chinese students.

The phrase 'students or the children' is better as 'students or children' for parallelism. Also, 'regarding the Chinese students' can be simplified to 'regarding Chinese students' as the definite article is unnecessary here.