Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, I often go to the library because I very love reading books and I very love learning learning vocabulary.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
I usually in library I reading books, I learning and I use and I use learning vocabulary English.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Yes, I very love in library. I'll go to library. So I went to library. I go to library when I have a five Year 5 year old.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
I don't know, because I am. I am a Vietnam kind. I'm not Chinese kind.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'I very love' không đúng. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản và chính xác hơn, ví dụ 'I really love reading books'. Ngoài ra, tránh lặp từ và cố gắng trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng.
Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library because I really enjoy reading books and learning new vocabulary.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ. Hãy nói rõ bạn làm gì trong thư viện với các câu đơn giản và mạch lạc.
Ví dụ: I usually read books and study English vocabulary when I am in the library.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ đơn để nói về thói quen trong quá khứ và tránh lặp từ. Ví dụ, 'I loved going to the library when I was five years old.'
Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to the library when I was five years old.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn không trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời thẳng vào câu hỏi và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Ví dụ, 'I'm not sure because I am Vietnamese, not Chinese.'
Ví dụ: I'm not sure because I am Vietnamese, so I don't know much about Chinese kids' habits.
× I very love reading books and I very love learning learning vocabulary.
✓ I really love reading books and I really love learning vocabulary.
The adverb 'very' is incorrectly used with the verb 'love'. 'Very' modifies adjectives or other adverbs, not verbs. The correct adverb to express intensity with 'love' is 'really'. Also, the word 'learning' is repeated unnecessarily.
× I usually in library I reading books, I learning and I use and I use learning vocabulary English.
✓ I usually read books in the library, learn, and use English vocabulary.
The sentence has multiple structural errors including missing verbs and incorrect word order. 'I usually in library I reading books' lacks a verb and proper preposition placement. The phrase 'I use and I use learning vocabulary English' is repetitive and ungrammatical. The corrected sentence uses proper verb forms and word order.
× I go to library when I have a five Year 5 year old.
✓ I went to the library when I was five years old.
The sentence incorrectly uses present tense 'go' and 'have' to describe a past event. The correct past tense forms 'went' and 'was' should be used. Also, 'a five Year 5 year old' is redundant and ungrammatical; it should be 'five years old'.
× I very love in library.
✓ I really love the library.
The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used here. The correct expression is 'love the library' without 'in'. Also, 'very' should be replaced with 'really' as explained earlier.
× I am a Vietnam kind. I'm not Chinese kind.
✓ I am Vietnamese. I'm not Chinese.
The word 'kind' is incorrectly used instead of 'kid' or better 'Vietnamese' as an adjective. The correct way to express nationality is to use the adjective form 'Vietnamese' and 'Chinese' without 'kind'.