Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. I often go to the library because I think the atmosphere in the library could push me to focus on my tasks and it is a quiet environment to reading books and studying.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
Not only do I read books and finish my assignments in the library, but I also review and preview my lessons in the university in the library, because in the library I can focus on my type.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Yes, I did. In Hangzhou there is a specific library built for kids and when I was little my parents often took me there and I read books and played with my friends.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Unfortunately, I have to say no, because there are not that much libraries in every city of China. But in big cities, many libraries locate in every corner of the city, so kids in big cities may go to there regularly.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容相关,但句子结构稍显重复,且有语法错误(如“to reading books”应为“to read books”)。建议注意动词不定式的正确使用,并尝试使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library because its quiet environment helps me concentrate on my studies. Moreover, the atmosphere there motivates me to focus on my tasks effectively.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够清晰,存在语法和用词错误(如“focus on my type”不明确)。建议简化句子结构,避免重复“in the library”,并使用更准确的词汇表达。
Ví dụ: In the library, I usually read books and complete my assignments. Additionally, I review and prepare my university lessons there because it helps me concentrate better.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且相关,但句子较长且缺少连接词,建议使用连接词使句子更连贯,同时注意时态一致。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was little, my parents often took me to a special children's library in Hangzhou, where I read books and played with my friends.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误(如“not that much libraries”应为“not that many libraries”),表达不够自然。建议注意可数名词的复数形式和数量词的搭配,并使用更自然的表达方式。
Ví dụ: Unfortunately, not many cities in China have enough libraries, so children there don't visit them often. However, in big cities, libraries are everywhere, so kids living there usually go regularly.
× it is a quiet environment to reading books and studying.
✓ it is a quiet environment for reading books and studying.
这里介词后面应该接动名词形式,'to reading'是不正确的,正确用法是'for reading',表示环境适合做某事。
× many libraries locate in every corner of the city, so kids in big cities may go to there regularly.
✓ many libraries are located in every corner of the city, so kids in big cities may go there regularly.
动词'locate'用法错误,应该用被动语态'are located'表示位置;'go to there'中'there'已经表示地点,前面不需要加介词'to'。