Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Ответ слишком длинный и немного неестественный. Следует избегать повторов и использовать более связные выражения. Также стоит добавить связующие слова для логичности.

Ví dụ: No, I don't often go to the library because nowadays all the books and information I need are available online, so I usually find everything on the Internet.

Gợi ý: Ответ содержит полезную информацию, но можно сделать его более естественным и связным, используя связующие слова и избегая повторов.

Ví dụ: I have been to the library only once, and instead of reading, I studied there with my friends to prepare for our exams.

Gợi ý: Ответ содержит повтор слова "obliged" и немного неестественные выражения. Следует использовать более плавные и естественные фразы, а также избегать повторов.

Ví dụ: Yes, I used to go to the library as a child because we had many books for studying and summer reading, so I often visited to find the books I needed.

Gợi ý: Ответ содержит много пауз и неуверенности, а также повторения. Следует говорить более уверенно, избегать слов-паразитов и использовать связные предложения.

Ví dụ: I believe Chinese children often go to the library just like kids in Russia or other countries because libraries are important places for studying and reading.

× Actually, I just got together with my friends and we studied together, preparing for our exams.

✓ Actually, I just got together with my friends and we studied together, preparing for our exams.

The sentence is correct in past tense as it describes a past event, so no correction is needed.

× So I was obliged obliged to go there to find the books I need.

✓ So I was obliged to go there to find the books I needed.

The verb 'need' should be in past tense 'needed' to match the past context of the sentence. Also, the word 'obliged' is repeated twice, so one should be removed.

× So I was obliged obliged to go there to find the books I need.

✓ So I was obliged to go there to find the books I needed.

The verb 'need' should be in past tense 'needed' to maintain tense consistency with the past event described.

× I think Chinese kids, uh, go to the library like our children, like in Russia or in any other country, because kids wherever should study, should read, and the library is a place to do this.

✓ I think Chinese kids, uh, go to the library like children in Russia or in any other country, because kids everywhere should study, should read, and the library is a place to do this.

The phrase 'like our children' is unclear and unnecessary; 'children in Russia' is clearer. Also, 'kids wherever' is incorrect; 'kids everywhere' is the correct phrase.