Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, I often go to the library near my home because it's very convenient for me to get there. I think the environment there is very comfortable for me to concentrate better better than at home and there is no distractions.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
I usually go to the library to study or read some books such as history books. I think history is very fascinating and full of excitement. The environment in the library is very comfortable for me and I can concentrate better than at home.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Actually, I seldom went to the library when I was a child. In fact, I preferred playing basketball. When I was a child. I often played basketball in the playground with my friends. I like the outdoor activities much better than go to the library.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, many Chinese children often go to the library because there is a very comfortable and peaceful environment free of distractions. For example, they often go to there to read some story books or comic books.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复词汇("better better")和语法错误("no distractions"应为"no distractions"),建议注意语法准确性和避免重复。同时,回答可以更简洁,避免冗余。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library near my home because it is convenient. The quiet environment helps me concentrate better than at home.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较好,但有部分信息重复(关于环境舒适和专注),建议使用连接词使表达更连贯,并避免重复。
Ví dụ: I usually study or read history books in the library because I find history fascinating. Moreover, the quiet environment helps me focus better than at home.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误("much better than go to the library"应为"much better than going to the library"),且句子结构重复,建议注意语法和句式多样性。
Ví dụ: Actually, I seldom went to the library as a child because I preferred playing basketball outdoors with my friends. I enjoyed outdoor activities much more than reading in the library.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中有小错误("go to there"应为"go there"),建议注意介词使用。同时,可以增加更多具体细节使回答更丰富。
Ví dụ: Yes, many Chinese children often go to the library because it offers a quiet and comfortable place to read. For example, they enjoy reading storybooks and comic books there.
× I think the environment there is very comfortable for me to concentrate better better than at home and there is no distractions.
✓ I think the environment there is very comfortable for me to concentrate better than at home and there are no distractions.
句中"better better"重复使用了比较级副词,应去掉一个"better"。此外,"there is no distractions"中"distractions"是复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式"are"。
× there is no distractions.
✓ there are no distractions.
"distractions"是复数名词,谓语动词应与主语保持一致,使用复数形式"are"。
× I like the outdoor activities much better than go to the library.
✓ I like outdoor activities much better than going to the library.
比较结构中,两个比较对象应保持形式一致,"go to the library"应改为动名词形式"going to the library"。
× they often go to there to read some story books or comic books.
✓ they often go there to read some story books or comic books.
"go to there"是不正确的搭配,"there"本身表示地点,不需要介词"to",应直接使用"go there"。