Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and structuring your sentences clearly. For example, start with a direct answer, then add a reason using linking words like 'because' or 'as'.

Ví dụ: I don't go to the library very often, but I usually visit once or twice a week because it's a quiet place where I can focus and learn new things.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using clearer linking words and avoiding repetition. Also, try to be more specific about what you enjoy about the books or articles. This will make your answer more engaging and coherent.

Ví dụ: Usually, I read books and articles by my favourite author, Chetan Bhagat, because his stories are very relatable and inspiring.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct sentence structures and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a kid. Our school had a library section and a special library period, so we visited the library three times every week.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Try to express your opinion more confidently and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words to make your answer logical and concise.

Ví dụ: I'm not certain, but I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because it helps them gain knowledge and improve their studies.

× No, I don't go often to the library, but I prefer to visit library in a week or twice a week just because library is a very helpful place and a very quiet place to read books and it helps us to gain more and more knowledge.

✓ No, I don't go often to the library, but I prefer to visit the library once or twice a week just because the library is a very helpful place and a very quiet place to read books and it helps us to gain more and more knowledge.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect in this context.

× No, I don't go often to the library, but I prefer to visit library in a week or twice a week just because library is a very helpful place and a very quiet place to read books and it helps us to gain more and more knowledge.

✓ No, I don't go often to the library, but I prefer to visit the library once or twice a week just because the library is a very helpful place and a very quiet place to read books and it helps us to gain more and more knowledge.

The phrase 'in a week' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'once or twice a week' to indicate frequency. Using 'in a week' is not appropriate for expressing how often something happens.

× Usually I read books and articles from one of my favorite authors and from one of my favorite celebrities whose articles are being published.

✓ Usually I read books and articles from one of my favorite authors and from one of my favorite celebrities whose articles are published.

The phrase 'are being published' suggests a continuous action which may not be accurate here. Using 'are published' is more appropriate to indicate that the articles exist and are available. Also, no article error here, but tense correction is needed.

× I basically read more and more books of the author known as Chetan Bhagat.

✓ I basically read more and more books by the author known as Chetan Bhagat.

The preposition 'of' is incorrect when referring to the author of books; the correct preposition is 'by' to indicate authorship.

× Yes, I used to visit library when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I used to visit the library when I was a kid.

The definite article 'the' is necessary before 'library' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener.

× In our school there was a library section and a library period.

✓ In our school, there was a library section and a library period.

A comma after 'In our school' improves sentence clarity, though the original sentence is grammatically acceptable. No major error here.

× So on every in every week we used to go thrice a time in library.

✓ So every week, we used to go to the library three times.

The phrase 'on every in every week' is incorrect and redundant; 'every week' is sufficient. 'Thrice a time' is incorrect; 'three times' is the correct expression. Also, 'in library' should be 'to the library' to indicate movement towards a place.

× I'm not sure, but maybe yes, Chinese kids often visit library as they get knowledge from it and they use that knowledge and get knowledge from library.

✓ I'm not sure, but maybe yes, Chinese kids often visit the library as they get knowledge from it and they use that knowledge and get knowledge from the library.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' when referring to a specific place. Omitting 'the' is incorrect in this context.