Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. I often go to the library for my study or work and I think library is so quiet that it's a good place to study.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
In the library, I usually prepare for my exams or my English presentations.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Actually I didn't because when I was a kid there was no library for me to study. But now in my hometown there are some library for learners to study.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Definitely. I think so because in China, many Chinese parents hope their kids can achieve a big achievement for their study. So Chinese kids often go to the library for studying.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为简单,缺少连贯的连接词和更具体的细节。建议在回答中使用连接词如“because”或“so”,并具体说明为什么图书馆是一个好地方。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library because it is very quiet and has many resources that help me focus on my studies.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答过于简短,缺少细节和连接词。建议补充更多具体内容,并用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: In the library, I usually prepare for my exams and English presentations by reviewing notes and practicing speaking, which helps me improve my skills.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,且表达不够流畅。建议注意时态和单复数形式,并使用连接词使句子更自然。
Ví dụ: Actually, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because there wasn't one in my hometown, but now there are several libraries available for learners.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中表达重复,且用词不够准确。建议避免重复,使用更自然的表达,并提供具体原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because their parents encourage them to study hard and use the library's resources to improve their learning.
× I think library is so quiet that it's a good place to study.
✓ I think the library is so quiet that it's a good place to study.
这里缺少定冠词“the”,因为“library”是特指的图书馆,应该用定冠词修饰。
× But now in my hometown there are some library for learners to study.
✓ But now in my hometown there are some libraries for learners to study.
“some”后面应该接复数名词,表示多个图书馆,所以“library”应改为复数形式“libraries”。
× So Chinese kids often go to the library for studying.
✓ So Chinese kids often go to the library to study.
“for studying”虽然语法上不错误,但更自然的表达是“to study”,表示目的。