Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
No, I don't often go to library because I usually prefer studying at home. It's quieter and more comfortable. Besides, I enjoy reading digital books than borrow books from library.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
In my spare time I love to find some books I have interest in the library and read it quietly, but when I have assignments to do, I will work on them in library.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
As I did, I love the school library most and as soon as the class is over I will rush into it and start my reading.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think so, because most Chinese kids are fond of books and they have the desire for knowledge.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“reading digital books than borrow books”应为“reading digital books rather than borrowing books”。建议注意动词形式和介词搭配,避免语法错误。同时,回答较为简单,可以适当丰富细节,使表达更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: No, I don't often go to the library because I usually prefer studying at home where it's quieter and more comfortable. Moreover, I enjoy reading digital books rather than borrowing physical ones from the library.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和表达不自然的问题,如“books I have interest in”应为“books I am interested in”,“read it”应为“read them”,“in library”应为“in the library”。建议注意冠词使用和复数形式,同时使用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: In my spare time, I love to find some books that I am interested in at the library and read them quietly. Additionally, when I have assignments to do, I usually work on them in the library.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够自然,“As I did”用法不当,建议改为“Yes, I did”。另外,“start my reading”应为“start reading”。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并注意时态一致。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I loved the school library the most, and as soon as class was over, I would rush there and start reading.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答较为简洁,可以通过增加具体例子或原因来丰富内容,使回答更具体和有说服力。建议使用连接词扩展句子,使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think so because most Chinese kids are fond of books and have a strong desire for knowledge. For example, many schools encourage students to visit libraries regularly to develop good reading habits.
× No, I don't often go to library because I usually prefer studying at home.
✓ No, I don't often go to the library because I usually prefer studying at home.
这里缺少定冠词“the”,因为“library”是特指的图书馆,应该用“the library”。
× Besides, I enjoy reading digital books than borrow books from library.
✓ Besides, I enjoy reading digital books more than borrowing books from the library.
“enjoy”后面应该接动名词形式,且比较结构中应使用“more than”,同时“borrow”应改为“borrowing”,并且“library”前应加定冠词“the”。
× In my spare time I love to find some books I have interest in the library and read it quietly, but when I have assignments to do, I will work on them in library.
✓ In my spare time, I love to find some books I am interested in at the library and read them quietly, but when I have assignments to do, I will work on them in the library.
“have interest in”应改为“am interested in”,表示“对……感兴趣”;“in the library”位置应调整;“read it”应改为“read them”,因为“books”是复数;“in library”应加定冠词“the library”。
× As I did, I love the school library most and as soon as the class is over I will rush into it and start my reading.
✓ I did, I loved the school library most and as soon as the class was over I would rush into it and start my reading.
描述过去的事情时,动词时态应为过去时,“love”改为“loved”,“is”改为“was”,“will”改为“would”,保持时态一致。
× As I did, I love the school library most and as soon as the class is over I will rush into it and start my reading.
✓ I did, I loved the school library most and as soon as the class was over I would rush into it and start my reading.
句中“the class”使用正确,无需修改。
× Yes, I think so, because most Chinese kids are fond of books and they have the desire for knowledge.
✓ Yes, I think so, because most Chinese kids are fond of books and they have the desire for knowledge.
该句语法正确,无需修改。