Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, I frequently to go to the library because I enjoy reading a wide range of books. The library has a book of documentaries and academic materials which help me gain in depth knowledge about various subjects.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
Are usually reading books or write my homeworks in the library because the library is very quiet and so it can make me focus on the homeworks or the books and it can improve myself.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid. I usually went there with my sister and we liked to borrow story books because we enjoyed reading fairy tales together. The library was quiet and a comfortable place where I can I could learn a lot.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, the most Chinese kids are enjoying reading books because there are a lot of knowledge in the in the academic books or the documentaries they can learn for it and.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“frequently to go”应为“frequently go”,且“a book of documentaries”表达不准确,应为“a collection of documentaries”。建议注意动词搭配和名词复数形式,避免语法错误。
Ví dụ: Yes, I frequently go to the library because I enjoy reading a wide range of books. The library has a collection of documentaries and academic materials which help me gain in-depth knowledge about various subjects.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然,如“Are usually reading”应为“I usually read”,“write my homeworks”应为“do my homework”。建议使用正确的时态和表达方式,并避免重复和冗长。
Ví dụ: I usually read books or do my homework in the library because it is very quiet, which helps me concentrate and improve myself.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较好,但最后一句中“where I can I could learn a lot”存在重复,应简化为“where I could learn a lot”。建议注意句子结构的简洁和准确。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid. I usually went there with my sister and we liked to borrow story books because we enjoyed reading fairy tales together. The library was quiet and a comfortable place where I could learn a lot.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误较多,如“the most Chinese kids are enjoying”应为“most Chinese kids enjoy”,“there are a lot of knowledge”应为“there is a lot of knowledge”。建议注意句子完整性和语法准确性。
Ví dụ: Yes, most Chinese kids enjoy reading books because academic books and documentaries provide a lot of knowledge for them to learn.
× Yes, I frequently to go to the library because I enjoy reading a wide range of books.
✓ Yes, I frequently go to the library because I enjoy reading a wide range of books.
句中 'frequently to go' 中 'to go' 不符合动词+ing形式的用法,应直接用动词原形 'go'。频率副词后直接接动词原形。
× The library has a book of documentaries and academic materials which help me gain in depth knowledge about various subjects.
✓ The library has books of documentaries and academic materials which help me gain in-depth knowledge about various subjects.
'a book of documentaries' 表达不当,应该用复数 'books' 来表示多种书籍,且 'in depth' 应连写为 'in-depth' 作为形容词。
× Are usually reading books or write my homeworks in the library because the library is very quiet and so it can make me focus on the homeworks or the books and it can improve myself.
✓ I usually read books or write my homework in the library because it is very quiet, so I can focus on my homework or the books, and it can help me improve myself.
句子缺少主语,'Are usually reading' 应改为 'I usually read';'homeworks' 应为不可数名词 'homework';句子结构混乱,需调整连接词和句子顺序使表达清晰。
× The library was quiet and a comfortable place where I can I could learn a lot.
✓ The library was a quiet and comfortable place where I could learn a lot.
时态应保持一致,既然前半句用过去时 'was',后半句也应使用过去时 'could',且句中重复 'I can I could' 是错误,应删除多余部分。
× Yes, the most Chinese kids are enjoying reading books because there are a lot of knowledge in the in the academic books or the documentaries they can learn for it and.
✓ Yes, most Chinese kids enjoy reading books because there is a lot of knowledge in academic books or documentaries that they can learn from.
'the most Chinese kids' 应为 'most Chinese kids';'are enjoying' 一般习惯用一般现在时 'enjoy' 表示习惯;'a lot of knowledge' 是不可数名词,谓语用单数 'is';'in the in the' 重复,应删去;'learn for it' 应为 'learn from'。