Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific reasons. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are coherent.

Ví dụ: No, I don't often go to the library because I have many books at home. However, if I need a book that I don't own or for a topic assigned by my professor, I visit the library to find it.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and off-topic. Focus on directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid irrelevant information.

Ví dụ: When I go to the library, I first choose a book from the shelf. Then, I sit quietly at a table and read carefully to gain more knowledge and improve my understanding.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Answer directly with a topic sentence, then add specific supporting details. Avoid irrelevant information and ensure your sentences are logical and coherent.

Ví dụ: No, I did not often go to the library as a child. Instead, I spent most of my time playing with friends in the park and enjoying outdoor activities.

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and specific information. Try to give a clear opinion supported by reasons or examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: I am not sure about all Chinese kids, but I believe many of them visit libraries regularly. This is because libraries provide good study materials that help them prepare for competitive exams.

× No, I don't open to to the light to be because I have a lot of books at my home and I usually we can if there is an any important book which I don't have or any important topic given by my professor, I don't.

✓ No, I don't go to the library because I have a lot of books at my home and usually, if there is any important book which I don't have or any important topic given by my professor, I go.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'open to to the light to be' which is not a proper phrase for going to the library. The correct preposition is 'go to the library'. Also, the sentence structure is confusing and needs rephrasing for clarity. The suggestion improves preposition use and sentence clarity.

× I never visited my family. Firstly I went to the book shelf and choose the book for me, and then I sat on the table quietly and read it carefully without wasting my time, making my story better and experience great and take some more and more knowledge.

✓ I never visited my family. Firstly, I went to the bookshelf and chose a book for myself, then I sat at the table quietly and read it carefully without wasting my time, improving my story and gaining more knowledge.

The verb 'choose' should be in past tense 'chose' to match the past tense narration. Also, 'bookshelf' is one word and 'sat on the table' is better as 'sat at the table'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× To be honest, when I was a kid, I've never been in the life really for study and he was really never going to like a child. I always used to play with my friends, always going to the park and on the right in the pipe and make a fun.

✓ To be honest, when I was a kid, I never really studied, and I never behaved like a child. I always used to play with my friends, always going to the park and riding on the pipe to have fun.

The sentence has incorrect tense usage and confusing phrases. 'I've never been in the life really for study' is incorrect; it should be 'I never really studied'. 'He was really never going to like a child' is unclear and changed to 'I never behaved like a child'. 'On the right in the pipe' is corrected to 'riding on the pipe'. The corrections improve tense consistency and clarity.

× I don't have the knowledge about it is according to their study material and the top competition of telecompetitive exams. I believe that they offer people to the library for their work and for a good study material.

✓ I don't have knowledge about it, but according to their study material and the top competition of telecompetitive exams, I believe that they encourage people to go to the library for their work and for good study material.

The original sentence misuses prepositions and has unclear phrasing. 'Offer people to the library' is incorrect; it should be 'encourage people to go to the library'. Also, 'I don't have the knowledge about it is according to' is corrected to 'I don't have knowledge about it, but according to'. These changes improve preposition use and sentence clarity.