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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you often go to the library?

Thí sinh

No, I like staying at home.

Giám khảo

What do you usually do in the library?

Thí sinh

When when I stay in library, I often report such a history book.

Giám khảo

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Thí sinh

No, when when I was a kid. My home is far from the library so it takes too many time to go to the library.

Giám khảo

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Thí sinh

Sure, Chinese kids often go to a library because library can provide good environment to read and learn.

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Part 1

Do you often go to the library?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答过于简短,缺乏细节和理由。建议在回答时加入原因或补充信息,使回答更自然且内容丰富。

Ví dụ: No, I don't often go to the library because I prefer studying at home where I feel more comfortable and have all my materials.

What do you usually do in the library?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,且内容不具体。建议使用正确的句式并具体说明在图书馆做什么。

Ví dụ: When I go to the library, I usually read history books and take notes to help me understand the subject better.

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复词语和语法错误,表达不够流畅。建议简洁明了地说明原因,并注意语法和用词准确。

Ví dụ: No, I didn't go to the library often as a child because it was too far from my home and took a long time to get there.

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为完整,但缺少连接词使句子显得生硬。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯,同时丰富细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because it provides a quiet and comfortable environment where they can focus on reading and learning.

Ngữ pháp

Verb in the present participle form

× No, I like staying at home.

No, I like to stay at home.

动词like后面接动名词(staying)虽然语法上正确,但在表达习惯上,喜欢某个动作时更常用不定式to stay,显得更自然。

Sentence structure errors

× When when I stay in library, I often report such a history book.

When I stay in the library, I often read a history book.

句子中重复了when,且动词report用错,应该用read表示“读书”。此外,缺少定冠词the修饰library。

Article errors

× When when I stay in library, I often report such a history book.

When I stay in the library, I often read a history book.

名词library前缺少定冠词the,英语中特指某个图书馆时需要加the。

Past tense issue

× No, when when I was a kid.

No, when I was a kid,

句子中重复了when,且句子不完整,缺少后续内容。应去掉重复的when并补充完整句子。

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× My home is far from the library so it takes too many time to go to the library.

My home is far from the library so it takes too much time to go to the library.

time是不可数名词,不能用many修饰,应使用much。

Article errors

× Sure, Chinese kids often go to a library because library can provide good environment to read and learn.

Sure, Chinese kids often go to the library because the library can provide a good environment to read and learn.

这里指特定的图书馆,需用定冠词the;good environment前缺少不定冠词a。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
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