Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, I often go to the library especially borrowing books, but I won't stay long at the library because I really enjoy reading books in my couch so I was just borrowing books from it and come go back home.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
I usually just borrowing books from the library and I even just book it booked it on the app before I went to the library. So if I arrive at the library I'll just pick them, pick them up and then leave. However.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid really often because there is a library near my house. My family always go to the library when we when when on the weekends.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think Chinese kids go to the library very often because there is lots of libraries around the neighborhood, so it makes children.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了基本意思,但语言不够自然,有语法错误和重复,句子结构较为混乱。建议简化句子,避免重复,并使用更自然的表达方式。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library to borrow books. However, I usually don't stay there long because I prefer reading at home on my couch.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复,句子不完整,表达不够清晰。建议使用完整句子,注意时态和语法,避免重复,并且补充更多细节使回答更丰富。
Ví dụ: I usually borrow books from the library. Before going, I reserve them through the app, so when I arrive, I just pick them up and leave quickly.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了基本内容,但有语法错误和重复,句子不够流畅。建议注意时态一致,避免重复,并使用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often went to the library as a child because there was one near my house. My family usually visited it together on weekends.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整,句子结构混乱,缺少具体细节和逻辑连接。建议补充完整句子,使用连接词,并提供更具体的理由或例子。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think Chinese kids often go to the library because there are many libraries in their neighborhoods, which makes it convenient for them to visit regularly.
× Yes, I often go to the library especially borrowing books, but I won't stay long at the library because I really enjoy reading books in my couch so I was just borrowing books from it and come go back home.
✓ Yes, I often go to the library especially to borrow books, but I don't stay long at the library because I really enjoy reading books on my couch, so I just borrow books from there and then go back home.
动词后面接动名词(-ing形式)时,需注意动词搭配。这里“especially borrowing books”应改为“especially to borrow books”,因为“especially”后面通常接不定式表示目的。
× I usually just borrowing books from the library and I even just book it booked it on the app before I went to the library.
✓ I usually just borrow books from the library and I even book them on the app before I go to the library.
“usually”后面应接动词原形“borrow”,而不是动名词“borrowing”。另外,时态应与习惯动作一致,使用一般现在时。
× I even just book it booked it on the app before I went to the library.
✓ I even just book it on the app before I go to the library.
句子中时态不一致,前半句应使用一般现在时“book”,后半句“went”应改为“go”以保持时态一致。
× Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid really often because there is a library near my house.
✓ Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid really often because there was a library near my house.
过去时态中,表示存在的“there is”应改为“there was”,以符合过去时间背景。
× My family always go to the library when we when when on the weekends.
✓ My family always goes to the library on the weekends.
“family”作为集合名词,通常视为单数,谓语动词应使用单数形式“goes”。
× Yes, I think Chinese kids go to the library very often because there is lots of libraries around the neighborhood, so it makes children.
✓ Yes, I think Chinese kids go to the library very often because there are lots of libraries around the neighborhood, so it attracts children.
“there is”应改为“there are”以匹配复数“lots of libraries”。另外,“makes children”表达不清,应改为“attracts children”。