Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, I often go to the library at the weekend. I always borrow books from there and it provides a quiet environment for me to to. Enjoy reading.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
Where I usually find some horror books and folktale in the library.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Where I couldn't remember clearly, but in my memory I don't. I don't. I didn't go to the library usually because my house is far away from the library. It spent me nearly one hour went there.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Maybe in recent years children preferred to prefer going to the library with their grandparents because of the facilities in library has improved a lot. There are there are delicious lunch and free Wi-Fi.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“to to. Enjoy reading”不完整且重复。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并使用连贯的表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library on weekends because it offers a quiet environment where I can enjoy reading and borrow interesting books.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误,缺少主语和谓语,表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题并补充细节,使用连贯的句子。
Ví dụ: I usually look for horror books and folktales in the library because I enjoy reading stories that are both thrilling and culturally rich.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中有多处语法错误和重复,表达不流畅。建议简洁明了地回答问题,并说明原因,使用正确的时态和句式。
Ví dụ: I don't remember clearly, but I usually didn't go to the library as a child because it was nearly an hour away from my home.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复,表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态和句式,避免重复,并具体说明原因。
Ví dụ: In recent years, more Chinese children prefer going to the library with their grandparents because the facilities have improved a lot, including free Wi-Fi and good food options.
× I always borrow books from there and it provides a quiet environment for me to to. Enjoy reading.
✓ I always borrow books from there and it provides a quiet environment for me to enjoy reading.
句中出现了多余的“to”导致语法错误,正确结构是“to enjoy reading”,表示目的。去掉多余的“to”即可。
× Where I usually find some horror books and folktale in the library.
✓ I usually find some horror books and folktales in the library.
句子中“folktale”应使用复数形式“folktales”,因为前面用了“some”,表示不止一本。
× Where I usually find some horror books and folktale in the library.
✓ I usually find some horror books and folktales in the library.
句首的“Where”使用不当,导致句子结构错误,应去掉“Where”,使句子结构完整。
× Where I couldn't remember clearly, but in my memory I don't. I don't. I didn't go to the library usually because my house is far away from the library.
✓ I can't remember clearly, but in my memory I didn't usually go to the library because my house was far away from the library.
句中“Where”用法错误,应去掉;“couldn't remember”应改为现在时“can't remember”表示现在无法回忆;“I don't. I don't.”重复且不合适,应删除;“didn't go to the library usually”语序应调整为“didn't usually go”;“my house is far away”应改为过去时“was far away”,与过去时态保持一致。
× It spent me nearly one hour went there.
✓ It took me nearly one hour to get there.
“spent me”用法错误,正确表达是“take sb. time”;“went there”应改为不定式“to get there”表示目的。
× Maybe in recent years children preferred to prefer going to the library with their grandparents because of the facilities in library has improved a lot.
✓ Maybe in recent years children prefer going to the library with their grandparents because the facilities in the library have improved a lot.
“preferred to prefer”重复且错误,应改为“prefer”;“facilities in library has”主谓不一致,应改为“facilities in the library have”;“because of”后接完整句时应改为“because”。
× There are there are delicious lunch and free Wi-Fi.
✓ There is delicious lunch and free Wi-Fi.
“lunch”是不可数名词,前面用复数“are”不正确,应使用单数“is”;句中“there are”重复,应去掉一个。