Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually go to the library to finish my homework because there have some yeah, quiet environments which can make me pay my own attention to the thing I'm doing.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
Uh, you know, library is the place supposed to be a place for reading, but in fact, I don't often reading in library. Instead I do my I would do my homework and I will finish my course tasks. Yeah, that's what I'm what I would do in library.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Umm, I guess I didn't. In my memory I have not gone to the library when I was a kid because I live in a really small town where don't have a big Public Library for people to go to borrow books. So yeah, I guess I have not.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
So from my perspective, most of the Chinese kids will not go to the library. At least they don't have such a habits to go to library often because parents think children should stay at home and doing their homework. Yeah, that's my opinion.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了去图书馆的原因,但语言不够自然,有语法错误和冗余。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并使用更准确的表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library because it is quiet there, which helps me concentrate on my homework.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复,表达不够清晰。建议直接回答问题,避免口语填充词,使用连贯的句子结构。
Ví dụ: Usually, I do my homework and complete my course tasks in the library, even though it is mainly meant for reading.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体,但语法和表达不够准确。建议使用更自然的句型,注意时态和冠词的使用。
Ví dụ: I don't think I went to the library as a child because I lived in a small town that didn't have a public library.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 表达观点时语法和词汇使用不够准确,句子结构较为简单。建议使用更准确的时态和词汇,避免重复,增强表达的逻辑性。
Ví dụ: In my opinion, most Chinese children don't often go to the library because their parents prefer them to stay at home and focus on their homework.
× because there have some yeah, quiet environments which can make me pay my own attention to the thing I'm doing.
✓ because there are some quiet environments which can help me concentrate on what I'm doing.
这里的主语是复数名词'environments',所以谓语动词应该用复数形式'are',而不是'shave'。中文解释:'there be'结构中,谓语动词要和主语的单复数保持一致。
× I don't often reading in library.
✓ I don't often read in the library.
在否定句中,助动词'do'后面应接动词原形,不能用动名词'reading'。中文解释:助动词后面动词要用原形,不能用-ing形式。
× I would do my homework and I will finish my course tasks. Yeah, that's what I'm what I would do in library.
✓ I would do my homework and finish my course tasks. Yeah, that's what I would do in the library.
'in library'前缺少定冠词'the',应为'in the library'。中文解释:表示特定地点时,通常需要使用定冠词'the'。
× I have not gone to the library when I was a kid because I live in a really small town where don't have a big Public Library for people to go to borrow books.
✓ I did not go to the library when I was a kid because I lived in a really small town which didn't have a big public library for people to borrow books.
描述过去的动作和状态时,应该使用一般过去时。'have not gone'是现在完成时,不适合描述过去具体时间发生的事情。中文解释:过去发生的事情用一般过去时。
× where don't have a big Public Library for people to go to borrow books.
✓ which didn't have a big public library for people to borrow books.
关系代词引导的定语从句中,主语不能省略,且应使用'which'指代前面的'town'。中文解释:定语从句中要用正确的关系代词,并保持主谓完整。
× most of the Chinese kids will not go to the library. At least they don't have such a habits to go to library often
✓ most Chinese kids do not go to the library. At least they don't have such a habit of going to the library often.
'habits'是复数,前面用'such a'表示单数,数量词和名词不匹配。中文解释:数量词和名词的单复数要一致。
× At least they don't have such a habits to go to library often
✓ At least they don't have such a habit of going to the library often.
'go to library'缺少定冠词'the',且'go to'后面接动名词短语时用'of going'。中文解释:固定搭配中介词和动词形式的正确使用。