Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
No, I don't. I rarely go to the library because I don't dig in and I'm not keen on to, I'm not keen on the book, uh, and also read and also reading book because it makes me feel bored. Yeah.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
Well, I can say for sure that in my opinion, I usually, uh, I usually do my homework with my friends and, uh, sometimes we buy some books, Yeah.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
No, I didn't go to went to library when I was when I was a kid because I didn't interested in reading book and also I prefer other activities like watching movies or hang out with.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
I can't say for sure because, uh, because in a lot of countries we have, uh, we have different culture and also have a different how to the adoptive children.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như cách dùng từ không chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, nên dùng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh nói lan man.
Ví dụ: No, I don't often go to the library because I find reading books boring. I prefer other activities like watching movies or spending time outdoors.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, việc nói "buy some books" trong thư viện không hợp lý, bạn nên nói về việc mượn sách hoặc học tập.
Ví dụ: Usually, I do my homework with my friends in the library because it is a quiet place. Sometimes, I borrow books to help me study.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu sự rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng cách và hoàn chỉnh câu. Ngoài ra, nên thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời phong phú hơn.
Ví dụ: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I wasn't interested in reading books. Instead, I preferred watching movies or hanging out with my friends.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh nói lan man và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác. Hãy cố gắng đưa ra ý kiến cá nhân hoặc dự đoán dựa trên kiến thức của bạn.
Ví dụ: I am not sure, but I think many Chinese kids do go to the library because reading is encouraged in schools and families.
× I rarely go to the library because I don't dig in and I'm not keen on to, I'm not keen on the book, uh, and also read and also reading book because it makes me feel bored.
✓ I rarely go to the library because I don't dig in and I'm not keen on it, I'm not keen on books, uh, and also reading books because it makes me feel bored.
The phrase 'keen on to' is incorrect; the correct form is 'keen on' followed by a noun or gerund without 'to'. Also, 'keen on the book' should be pluralized to 'keen on books' to generalize the statement. 'Also read and also reading book' is awkward; 'also reading books' is correct as 'reading' is a gerund here.
× I rarely go to the library because I don't dig in and I'm not keen on to, I'm not keen on the book, uh, and also read and also reading book because it makes me feel bored.
✓ I rarely go to the library because I don't dig in and I'm not keen on it, I'm not keen on books, uh, and also reading books because it makes me feel bored.
The preposition 'on' should not be followed by 'to' in 'keen on to'; the correct preposition is 'keen on' followed directly by the object.
× I rarely go to the library because I don't dig in and I'm not keen on to, I'm not keen on the book, uh, and also read and also reading book because it makes me feel bored.
✓ I rarely go to the library because I don't dig in and I'm not keen on it, I'm not keen on books, uh, and also reading books because it makes me feel bored.
The word 'book' should be pluralized to 'books' when referring to books in general.
× Well, I can say for sure that in my opinion, I usually, uh, I usually do my homework with my friends and, uh, sometimes we buy some books, Yeah.
✓ Well, I can say for sure that in my opinion, I usually do my homework with my friends and sometimes we buy some books, yeah.
The sentence is mostly correct; the filler words 'uh' can be omitted for clarity. No major grammar issues related to verb + -ing form here.
× No, I didn't go to went to library when I was when I was a kid because I didn't interested in reading book and also I prefer other activities like watching movies or hang out with.
✓ No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I wasn't interested in reading books and I preferred other activities like watching movies or hanging out with friends.
The phrase 'didn't go to went to' is incorrect; 'didn't go to' is correct. 'Didn't interested' should be 'wasn't interested' because 'interested' is an adjective and requires 'was/were' in past tense. 'Reading book' should be plural 'reading books'. 'Prefer' should be past tense 'preferred' to match past context. 'Hang out with' needs an object and 'hang out' should be in gerund form 'hanging out'.
× No, I didn't go to went to library when I was when I was a kid because I didn't interested in reading book and also I prefer other activities like watching movies or hang out with.
✓ No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I wasn't interested in reading books and I preferred other activities like watching movies or hanging out with friends.
The word 'library' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Reading book' should be plural 'reading books' to generalize the activity.
× No, I didn't go to went to library when I was when I was a kid because I didn't interested in reading book and also I prefer other activities like watching movies or hang out with.
✓ No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I wasn't interested in reading books and I preferred other activities like watching movies or hanging out with friends.
The phrase 'interested in' is correct, but 'didn't interested' is wrong; it should be 'wasn't interested'. Also, 'hang out with' requires an object, so 'friends' is added.
× No, I didn't go to went to library when I was when I was a kid because I didn't interested in reading book and also I prefer other activities like watching movies or hang out with.
✓ No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I wasn't interested in reading books and I preferred other activities like watching movies or hanging out with friends.
The phrase 'hang out with' requires an object pronoun or noun; adding 'friends' clarifies the meaning.
× I can't say for sure because, uh, because in a lot of countries we have, uh, we have different culture and also have a different how to the adoptive children.
✓ I can't say for sure because, uh, in a lot of countries we have different cultures and also different ways of raising children.
The phrase 'different culture' should be plural 'different cultures' to match 'a lot of countries'. 'Have a different how to the adoptive children' is incorrect; it should be 'different ways of raising children' or similar.
× I can't say for sure because, uh, because in a lot of countries we have, uh, we have different culture and also have a different how to the adoptive children.
✓ I can't say for sure because, uh, in a lot of countries we have different cultures and also different ways of raising children.
The word 'culture' should be pluralized to 'cultures' when referring to multiple countries.
× I can't say for sure because, uh, because in a lot of countries we have, uh, we have different culture and also have a different how to the adoptive children.
✓ I can't say for sure because, uh, in a lot of countries we have different cultures and also different ways of raising children.
The phrase 'have a different how to the adoptive children' is ungrammatical and unclear; it should be rephrased to 'different ways of raising children' for clarity and correctness.