Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，有重复和冗余，句子结构不完整。建议简化句子，避免重复，注意冠词和介词的使用，使表达更流畅自然。

Ví dụ: I don't often go to the library at home because I'm not a big reader. However, when I travel abroad, I like to visit libraries because many of them have a rich history.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，缺少连贯性。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，补充完整表达，避免语法错误。

Ví dụ: Most people use the library to read books or find information online, but I usually just visit and browse because I rely on the Internet for most of my research.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，注意时态和主谓一致，避免重复，表达更清晰。

Ví dụ: Yes, when I was a child, my grandfather, who loved reading, often took me to the city library. I especially enjoyed reading cartoon books because the vivid pictures made it easier for me to understand.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，句子不完整。建议理清句子结构，使用正确的语法和词汇，表达更具体明确。

Ví dụ: It depends on the city. In big cities like Shanghai or Beijing, children are more willing to visit libraries compared to smaller cities, because libraries in big cities usually have better facilities.

× If I'm in a foreign country, I will go to library because most of libraries in foreign countries they have centuries of history.

✓ If I'm in a foreign country, I will go to the library because most libraries in foreign countries have centuries of history.

这里缺少定冠词'the'，'library'前应加'the'表示特指。'most of libraries'应改为'most libraries'，且去掉多余的代词'they'。

× But if in domestic library, I hardly ever go to there because I'm not a big reader.

✓ But if I'm in a domestic library, I hardly ever go there because I'm not a big reader.

'if in domestic library'缺少主语，应补充为'if I'm in a domestic library'。'go to there'中'to'多余，'go there'即可。

× I know for most of people they are reading the books, finding materials or searching some information online, but for me I just take a visit, browse around because I rely on the Internet to.

✓ I know most people are reading books, finding materials, or searching for some information online, but for me I just visit and browse around because I rely on the Internet too.

'most of people'应为'most people'，'the books'改为'books'更自然。'searching some information'应为'searching for some information'。'take a visit'应改为'visit'。句尾'to'应为'too'。

× In the library where I can find a lot of book to read, especially the cartoon books in because I find books with a lot of vivid pictures makes me make me easy.

✓ In the library, I can find a lot of books to read, especially cartoon books, because I find books with a lot of vivid pictures make it easier for me.

句子结构混乱，'where'用法不当，改为简单句。'a lot of book'应为'a lot of books'。'makes me make me easy'表达错误，改为'make it easier for me'。

× children always willing to go to the library more than sitting in the than in my city, because the library in big city is always equal.

✓ children are always more willing to go to the library than to sit at home in my city, because the libraries in big cities are always better equipped.

缺少动词'are'，'more willing'比较级用法错误。'more than sitting in the than in my city'结构混乱，改为'than to sit at home in my city'。'library in big city is always equal'表达不清，改为'libraries in big cities are always better equipped'更准确。