Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, when I am at free time, I will go to the library. I go to the library five times a week.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
I usually preparing for my exam at the library and reading some books. What's more, I will do some I will do some practical, practical tests by myself.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Yes, when I was a kid I usually go to the library for the reason that I need to finish my homework at the library and I can be concentrate on my homework in library.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, Chinese kids usually go to the library. Every time. When I'm go to the library, I will see the children who is at primary school go to the library to finish their homework.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答时应避免语法错误,如“when I am at free time”应改为“when I have free time”。此外,回答可以更自然简洁,例如直接说“I usually go to the library five times a week when I have free time.”
Ví dụ: I usually go to the library five times a week when I have free time because it's a quiet place to study.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“I usually preparing”应为“I usually prepare”。重复表达“do some I will do some practical, practical tests”应避免。建议使用连词使句子更连贯,如“Besides, I also do some practical tests by myself.”
Ví dụ: I usually prepare for my exams and read books in the library. Besides, I also do some practical tests by myself to improve my skills.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 时态使用不当,“I usually go”应为“I usually went”。表达应更自然,如“because I needed to finish my homework and could concentrate better there.”
Ví dụ: Yes, when I was a kid, I usually went to the library because I needed to finish my homework and could concentrate better there.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 句子不连贯且有语法错误,如“Every time.”应合并到前句,“When I'm go to the library”应为“When I go to the library”,“who is at primary school”应为“who are in primary school”。建议合并句子并使用连词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, Chinese kids usually go to the library. When I go there, I often see primary school children finishing their homework.
× Yes, when I am at free time, I will go to the library.
✓ Yes, when I have free time, I go to the library.
这里应使用一般现在时表示习惯动作,且短语应为'have free time',而不是'am at free time'。
× I usually preparing for my exam at the library and reading some books.
✓ I usually prepare for my exam at the library and read some books.
动词'prepare'和'read'应使用动词原形,因为前面有副词usually修饰,表示习惯动作。
× What's more, I will do some I will do some practical, practical tests by myself.
✓ What's more, I do some practical tests by myself.
这里描述习惯动作,应使用一般现在时,且句子中重复了'I will do some',应删除重复部分。
× Yes, when I was a kid I usually go to the library for the reason that I need to finish my homework at the library and I can be concentrate on my homework in library.
✓ Yes, when I was a kid I usually went to the library because I needed to finish my homework there and I could concentrate on my homework in the library.
描述过去习惯动作,应使用过去时态;'can be concentrate'错误,应为'could concentrate';'in library'缺少冠词,改为'in the library'。
× Every time. When I'm go to the library, I will see the children who is at primary school go to the library to finish their homework.
✓ Every time when I go to the library, I see children who are in primary school going to the library to finish their homework.
'I'm go'错误,应为'I go';'who is'应为'who are',因为children是复数;'at primary school'应为'in primary school';句子结构需调整使其通顺。