Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Perbaiki penggunaan tense dan grammar, serta buat kalimat lebih singkat dan jelas. Gunakan linking words untuk menghubungkan ide dengan lebih baik. Misalnya, gunakan 'used to go' untuk masa lalu dan hindari pengulangan kata.

Ví dụ: I used to go to the library often when I was young because we didn't have the Internet or smartphones. Therefore, it was easier to find books and gain the knowledge I craved.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki struktur kalimat dan tata bahasa, serta gunakan linking words untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren. Jelaskan profesi dengan benar dan gunakan vocabulary yang tepat.

Ví dụ: I usually visit the library to find information on topics that interest me, such as planets, zoo animals, and plants. Since I am a biology teacher, I like to gather information from books to support my teaching.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki penggunaan tense dan grammar, serta buat kalimat lebih ringkas dan jelas. Gunakan linking words untuk menghubungkan ide dan hindari pengulangan kata.

Ví dụ: Yes, I went to the library as a kid because there were no smartphones back then. Therefore, reading books was the only way to gain new knowledge and information.

Gợi ý: Hindari penggunaan kata pengisi seperti 'umm' dan perbaiki grammar. Buat kalimat lebih jelas dan terstruktur dengan baik menggunakan linking words. Jelaskan alasan dengan spesifik.

Ví dụ: I think Chinese kids often go to the library because, when I was a kid, many of my Chinese friends enjoyed reading challenging books. Their interest motivated me to read similar books as well.

× When I was young, I often go to the library because back then we don't have Internet and we don't have the smartphone to easily access the information.

✓ When I was young, I often went to the library because back then we didn't have the Internet and we didn't have smartphones to easily access information.

The sentence describes past habits and situations, so the verbs should be in the past tense. 'Go' should be 'went', 'don't have' should be 'didn't have', and 'the smartphone' should be plural 'smartphones' because it refers generally to devices. Also, 'Internet' usually takes the definite article 'the'.

× When I was young, I often go to the library because back then we don't have Internet and we don't have the smartphone to easily access the information.

✓ When I was young, I often went to the library because back then we didn't have the Internet and we didn't have smartphones to easily access information.

'Internet' is a unique entity and requires the definite article 'the'. Also, 'the smartphone' is incorrect here because it refers to smartphones in general, so no article or plural form is needed.

× So for me it's easier to go to library and find some book, read a lot of books and get the knowledge I craving for.

✓ So for me it's easier to go to the library and find some books, read a lot of books and get the knowledge I am craving for.

'Library' is a countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. 'Some book' should be plural 'some books' to match the context. Also, 'I craving' is missing the auxiliary verb 'am'.

× So for me it's easier to go to library and find some book, read a lot of books and get the knowledge I craving for.

✓ So for me it's easier to go to the library and find some books, read a lot of books and get the knowledge I am craving for.

The phrase 'I craving' is incorrect because 'craving' is a present participle and needs the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense 'I am craving'.

× I usually go to the library when I need to find any information or when I want to know about interesting topic for me for example such as planets, zoo animals and plants 'cause I'm a teacher and I'm a biology so I like to find the information from the book.

✓ I usually go to the library when I need to find any information or when I want to know about interesting topics for me, for example, such as planets, zoo animals, and plants because I'm a teacher and I teach biology, so I like to find information from books.

'Interesting topic' should be plural 'interesting topics' to match the general meaning. 'I'm a biology' is incorrect; it should be 'I teach biology' or 'I'm a biology teacher'. Also, 'the information from the book' should be 'information from books' because information is uncountable and plural is more appropriate here.

× I usually go to the library when I need to find any information or when I want to know about interesting topic for me for example such as planets, zoo animals and plants 'cause I'm a teacher and I'm a biology so I like to find the information from the book.

✓ I usually go to the library when I need to find any information or when I want to know about interesting topics for me, for example, such as planets, zoo animals, and plants because I'm a teacher and I teach biology, so I like to find information from books.

'The information' is incorrect because 'information' is uncountable and does not usually take 'the' unless referring to specific information. Also, 'the book' should be plural 'books' to indicate general sources.

× And I really like to read the book and find a lot of information and a lot of knowledge that I never know before.

✓ And I really liked to read books and find a lot of information and a lot of knowledge that I had never known before.

The sentence refers to past experiences, so verbs should be in past tense: 'like' to 'liked', 'know' to past perfect 'had never known' to indicate knowledge before that time. Also, 'the book' should be plural 'books' to generalize.

× And I really like to read the book and find a lot of information and a lot of knowledge that I never know before.

✓ And I really liked to read books and find a lot of information and a lot of knowledge that I had never known before.

'The book' is singular but the context implies multiple books, so it should be plural 'books'.

× They like read lot of hard stuff and that's also make me want to read the same book that it's triggered me to read the, the, the.

✓ They like to read a lot of hard stuff and that also makes me want to read the same books that triggered me to read them.

'Like read' should be 'like to read' to correctly express preference. 'Lot of' needs an article 'a lot of'. 'That's also make' should be 'that also makes' to agree with singular subject. 'The same book' should be plural 'books' to match context. 'It's triggered me' should be 'triggered me' as past tense. The repeated 'the' is unnecessary and removed.