Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, which affects naturalness and effectiveness. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. Also, keep your answer concise within 5 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ví dụ: I don't often go to the library nowadays because I live in a remote area without nearby libraries. Instead, I usually read books and access resources online, which is very convenient. However, I sometimes use online materials provided by libraries to support my reading.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but is incomplete and contains some grammatical mistakes. Try to complete your sentences fully and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, provide specific details to enrich your answer and keep it concise and natural.

Ví dụ: When I was at university in Tam Wind, I usually went to the library to find references for my essays. Especially towards the end of the semester, I preferred the library because it offered a quiet and peaceful environment for studying.

Gợi ý: Your answer is brief and contains unclear expressions and grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, explain your reasons with specific details, and avoid vague phrases. Use linking words to improve coherence and keep your answer natural and concise.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a child because there was no library in my hometown. Also, I had limited access to written materials, so visiting a library was not part of my routine.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by separating your ideas clearly and using linking words. Avoid vague phrases like 'this is a thing' and use more precise vocabulary. Also, try to provide a direct answer about Chinese kids before giving your own country's situation as a comparison.

Ví dụ: I'm not sure about Chinese children since I don't live in China. However, in my country, children don't often go to the library because not every school has one. Therefore, improving library access in schools would be beneficial.

× Note, I haven't gone to the library for several years after my university graduation.

✓ Note, I haven't gone to the library for several years since my university graduation.

The preposition 'after' is incorrectly used here; 'since' is the correct preposition to indicate the time from a past event until now.

× Now I'm living in a place where there isn't any life free, so I often read books and other resources online.

✓ Now I'm living in a place where there isn't any free life, so I often read books and other resources online.

The phrase 'life free' is incorrect; the adjective 'free' should precede the noun 'life' to form the correct phrase 'free life'.

× And I still think it's convenient for me because sometimes I can access to the online resources in some library.

✓ And I still think it's convenient for me because sometimes I can access the online resources in some libraries.

The verb 'access' should not be followed by the preposition 'to'. Also, 'some library' should be pluralized to 'some libraries' to indicate multiple possible locations.

× At this time, I went to library to look for a quiet and peaceful place for studying.

✓ At this time, I went to the library to look for a quiet and peaceful place for studying.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place.

× So routine and library seems a far idea for me.

✓ So routine and library seem a far idea for me.

The compound subject 'routine and library' is plural, so the verb should be 'seem' instead of 'seems' to agree in number.