Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but to improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'Also', you could use 'Moreover' or 'In addition'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I frequently visit the library because it helps me concentrate better on my assignments. Moreover, I enjoy relaxing there by watching educational movies on my laptop or reading novels.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but could be improved by avoiding redundancy and using more precise linking words. For example, instead of 'Additionally' and 'too' together, choose one linking word. Also, try to be more specific about the types of novels or projects.

Ví dụ: In the library, I usually work on my university assignments and meet with study groups to collaborate on projects. Furthermore, I enjoy reading mystery novels during my free time there.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and well-structured. To enhance it, you could add a linking word to connect your ideas more smoothly and provide a bit more detail about the activities you enjoyed.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't go to the library as a child because I didn't feel the need to. Instead, I preferred playing outside and engaging in physical activities like soccer and cycling.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by avoiding vague phrases like 'I'm not sure' and by using more precise vocabulary. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: Although I am not certain, I have heard that many Chinese students often visit libraries because they are popular places that provide a quiet environment, which is ideal for concentrating on studies.

× I heard that most of Chinese students go to the library because libraries are popular spots in China.

✓ I heard that most Chinese students go to the library because libraries are popular spots in China.

The phrase 'most of Chinese students' is incorrect because 'Chinese students' is a plural noun phrase without a determiner. The correct form is 'most Chinese students' without 'of'. This is a common plural quantifier usage in English.