List— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Actually, I don't make any list whenever I want to go shopping because I just want to relax myself and recharge. So I just buy anything what I want. Just like yesterday I go to the supermarket, buy a pair of shoes because I think they are pretty good.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Sometimes if I have to finish a difficult tasks, I must make a list to organize my works with high efficiency. For example, just last semester I have to make a presentation about environmental issues.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

Maybe because they think it's complex and waste of time sometimes I think so because it's just easy task. Why you need to make a list? Alright.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I think I prefer to make list on my phone because it's very convenient and you don't need to use a pen and paper, you just need to use your finger to clip your phone. Alright.

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Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“buy anything what I want”应为“buy anything I want”。建议简化句子结构,避免冗余,同时注意时态和冠词的使用。

Ví dụ: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I like to relax and buy whatever catches my eye. For example, yesterday I bought a pair of shoes that I really liked at the supermarket.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,如“a difficult tasks”应为“a difficult task”,“my works”应为“my work”。建议使用更准确的词汇和时态,使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: Sometimes, when I have a difficult task, I make a list to organize my work efficiently. For example, last semester I made a list to prepare a presentation about environmental issues.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯,表达含糊且有语法错误。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅,并明确表达观点。避免使用口语化的“Alright”。

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they think it's complicated and a waste of time. Personally, I sometimes feel that way when the tasks are simple.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,如“make list”应为“make a list”,“clip your phone”表达不准确。建议使用更准确的表达方式,并避免口语化结尾。

Ví dụ: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient. You don't need pen and paper; you can just use your finger to tap on the screen.

Ngữ pháp

Verb in the past participle form

× Just like yesterday I go to the supermarket, buy a pair of shoes because I think they are pretty good.

✓ Just like yesterday I went to the supermarket and bought a pair of shoes because I thought they were pretty good.

这里描述的是过去发生的动作,动词需要用过去式。'go' 应改为 'went','buy' 应改为 'bought','think' 应改为 'thought',以符合过去时态。

Singular and plural issue

× Sometimes if I have to finish a difficult tasks, I must make a list to organize my works with high efficiency.

✓ Sometimes if I have to finish a difficult task, I must make a list to organize my work with high efficiency.

'tasks' 是复数,但前面有不定冠词 'a',应改为单数 'task'。'works' 作为不可数名词时不加复数形式,应改为 'work'。

Present tense issue

× Maybe because they think it's complex and waste of time sometimes I think so because it's just easy task.

✓ Maybe because they think it's complex and a waste of time. Sometimes I think so because it's just an easy task.

'waste of time' 前缺少冠词 'a','easy task' 前也缺少冠词 'an',需要加上以符合英语习惯。句子结构也需要分开以避免句子过长。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I think I prefer to make list on my phone because it's very convenient and you don't need to use a pen and paper, you just need to use your finger to clip your phone.

✓ I think I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient and you don't need to use a pen and paper; you just need to use your finger to click on your phone.

'make list' 缺少冠词 'a'。'clip your phone' 应为 'click on your phone','click' 是正确的动词,且需要介词 'on'。此外,句子中应使用分号或句号分开两个独立分句。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Difficult— Hard; Troublesome; Inconvenient
Easy— Uncomplicated; Docile; Vulnerable; Leisurely
Good— Fine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
High— Tall; High-ranking; Inflated; Strong; Favorable
Pretty— Attractive; Quite; Beautify
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