Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
When I show up I don't want to make a list because I just go to market to buy something I want. I don't wish to my brain power.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
At work, yeah, of course I often make a list or when I work because I myself displaying make make a list like how, how come me more efficiently to do some important things and making me stay over LCISD.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I think is depends on their person. For instance I want to make A to do list when I work, but I know however other people they don't want to do the list because I think the list the waste their time or is way is so boring.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Actually, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I often take my open my phone to communicate with my colleagues or. On chat information.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 你的回答不够自然,语法和表达存在错误,且内容不够具体。建议用更自然的表达方式,直接回答问题,并给出具体原因。
Ví dụ: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I need at the moment.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法混乱,表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地说明是否做清单,并解释清单如何帮助提高工作效率。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often make a to-do list at work because it helps me organize my tasks and complete important things more efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够流畅。建议用更自然的句子表达观点,并给出具体原因。
Ví dụ: I think it depends on the person. Some people find making lists boring or a waste of time, so they prefer not to use them.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不清晰。建议直接说明偏好,并解释原因,保持句子完整。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, and it's convenient to update my list anytime.
× I don't wish to my brain power.
✓ I don't want to waste my brain power.
这里 'wish to' 用法错误,正确表达应该是 'want to waste',表示不想浪费脑力。
× At work, yeah, of course I often make a list or when I work because I myself displaying make make a list like how, how come me more efficiently to do some important things and making me stay over LCISD.
✓ At work, yeah, of course I often make a list when I work because it helps me work more efficiently and do important things.
原句结构混乱,重复单词且表达不清晰。应简化句子,明确表达制作清单帮助提高效率。
× I think is depends on their person.
✓ I think it depends on the person.
这里 'is depends' 结构错误,应为 'it depends',且 'their person' 应为 'the person',指代单数。
× For instance I want to make A to do list when I work, but I know however other people they don't want to do the list because I think the list the waste their time or is way is so boring.
✓ For instance, I want to make a to-do list when I work, but I know some other people don't want to make a list because they think it wastes their time or is boring.
句中 'they don't want to do the list' 用法不当,应为 'don't want to make a list',且句子结构需调整使表达更清晰。
× Actually, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I often take my open my phone to communicate with my colleagues or. On chat information.
✓ Actually, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I often open my phone to communicate with my colleagues or chat.
句中 'take my open my phone' 结构错误,应为 'open my phone',且 'On chat information' 不合适,改为 'chat' 更自然。