Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I often make a list for my work. I think is a way to avoid forgetting things.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Because many people sing, make her listener is a good way to avoid forgetting things.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
How often make a really strong paper because I think it is good for my eyes.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答过于简短,缺乏细节和连贯性。建议在回答时增加原因或具体情况,使回答更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答基本符合要求,但语法有误,且表达不够完整。建议注意语法准确性,并用连接词丰富内容。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often make a list for my work because it helps me avoid forgetting important tasks and stay organized.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不相关且语法混乱,未能直接回答问题。建议理解问题后,给出具体原因并用连词连接。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming, and they prefer to remember things naturally.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不清晰且语法错误较多,未能明确表达偏好。建议明确表达选择并给出理由,使用连词使句子连贯。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on paper because it is easier on my eyes, and I can quickly jot down notes without using a screen.
× I think is a way to avoid forgetting things.
✓ I think it is a way to avoid forgetting things.
句子中缺少主语“it”,导致结构不完整。正确表达应为“I think it is...”,表示“我认为这是一种...”。
× Because many people sing, make her listener is a good way to avoid forgetting things.
✓ Because many people think making a list is a good way to avoid forgetting things.
原句结构混乱,语义不清。应使用“think making a list”表达“认为做清单”,并且去掉无关词“sing”和“her listener”,使句子通顺。
× How often make a really strong paper because I think it is good for my eyes.
✓ I often make a list on paper because I think it is good for my eyes.
句子缺少主语,且“how often”用法错误。应使用“I often”表示频率,并明确动作“make a list on paper”,使句子完整且符合语境。