Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like listing when I'm going to shopping. It's helps me save time. So it's helps me like employees money. When I'm going to shopping like a TMZ, I write most important items for my list.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually make a list for my board especially on special day because it's it's busy day on me busy. The only answer I use my digital app to create my list an it's reminder me of important task when it's time comes which makes it easier.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Because some people so it takes so much time, but it's not it's easier like per like people. So again, reminder all my task like you right and don't write down not it's it's not easier like.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer making less on my phone because it's very confident and saves time. My phone also sent me a reminder which helps me remember important task. Overall, using my phone makes organizing my daily activities much easier.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases such as 'like employees money' and 'like a TMZ'. To improve, focus on clear and correct sentence structures, avoid redundancy, and use precise vocabulary. Also, keep your answer concise and coherent.
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me save time and money. For example, when I go to the supermarket, I write down the most important items to avoid forgetting anything.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing like 'it's busy day on me busy' and 'the only answer'. To improve, use clear sentences, correct grammar, and linking words to connect ideas logically.
Ví dụ: Yes, I often make a list for my work, especially on busy days. I use a digital app that reminds me of important tasks when the time comes, which makes managing my work much easier.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and difficult to understand due to incomplete sentences and confusing phrases. To improve, provide a clear reason with supporting details, use complete sentences, and avoid repetition.
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time. They may prefer to remember tasks mentally rather than writing them down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains minor grammatical errors such as 'making less' instead of 'making lists' and 'sent' instead of 'sends'. To improve, use correct verb forms and add linking words to enhance coherence.
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and saves time. Additionally, my phone sends me reminders, which help me remember important tasks. Overall, using my phone makes organizing my daily activities much easier.
× Yes, I like listing when I'm going to shopping.
✓ Yes, I like making a list when I go shopping.
The verb 'like' is followed by the gerund form 'making' to express preference. 'Listing' is not commonly used in this context. Also, 'going to shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping' without 'to'.
× It's helps me save time.
✓ It helps me save time.
The subject 'It' requires the verb 'help' in the third person singular form without 's' after 'it'. 'It's' is a contraction of 'it is' which is incorrect here.
× So it's helps me like employees money.
✓ So it helps me save money like employees.
Again, 'it's helps' is incorrect; it should be 'it helps'. Also, 'like employees money' is unclear; assuming the intended meaning is 'save money like employees'.
× When I'm going to shopping like a TMZ, I write most important items for my list.
✓ When I go shopping at a TMZ, I write the most important items on my list.
The phrase 'going to shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping'. The preposition 'at' is used for places like 'TMZ'. Also, 'for my list' should be 'on my list' to indicate items included in the list.
× Yes, I usually make a list for my board especially on special day because it's it's busy day on me busy.
✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my board, especially on special days because they are busy days for me.
The phrase 'on special day' should be plural 'on special days'. 'It's it's busy day on me busy' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'they are busy days for me' to express the intended meaning.
× The only answer I use my digital app to create my list an it's reminder me of important task when it's time comes which makes it easier.
✓ Usually, I use my digital app to create my list, and it reminds me of important tasks when the time comes, which makes it easier.
'The only answer' is unclear; 'Usually' fits better. 'It's reminder me' is incorrect; should be 'it reminds me'. 'Important task' should be plural 'important tasks'. 'When it's time comes' should be 'when the time comes'.
× Because some people so it takes so much time, but it's not it's easier like per like people.
✓ Because for some people, it takes so much time, but for others, it's easier.
The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. Corrected to express the intended meaning clearly with proper pronouns and structure.
× So again, reminder all my task like you right and don't write down not it's it's not easier like.
✓ So again, reminding all my tasks by writing them down makes it easier, and not writing them down is not easier.
The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Corrected to a clear sentence with proper pronouns and verb forms.
× I prefer making less on my phone because it's very confident and saves time.
✓ I prefer making lists on my phone because it's very convenient and saves time.
'Making less' is a typo; should be 'making lists'. 'Confident' is incorrect adjective here; 'convenient' is appropriate.
× My phone also sent me a reminder which helps me remember important task.
✓ My phone also sends me reminders which help me remember important tasks.
The verb tense should be present simple 'sends' to match habitual action. 'Reminder' should be plural 'reminders' to match 'helps' changed to 'help' for plural subject. 'Important task' should be plural 'important tasks'.