List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中有一些语法和词汇错误，如“shot list”应为“shopping list”，“charaktery item by session of shock”表达不清晰。建议你使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，避免拼写错误，并且保持句子简洁自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go out. It helps me remember important items and stick to my budget. Also, I organize the list by store sections to shop more efficiently.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“which send me reminder”应为“which sends me reminders”，以及“a sense of successful”应为“a sense of success”。建议注意主谓一致和名词形式，表达更准确自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a checklist for my work. It helps me stay organized and focused. I use a digital app that sends me reminders, and I feel a sense of success when I complete tasks.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和表达不准确的问题，如“was racing time”应为“is a waste of time”，“remember task”应为“remember tasks”。建议使用更准确的表达，并注意单复数和时态。

Ví dụ: Some people think making a list is a waste of time. They trust their memory and prefer to start working immediately instead of writing things down.

Gợi ý: 回答中有拼写和语法错误，如“drop down a list”应为“write a list”，“more convenience”应为“more convenient”，“rearrange item”应为“rearrange items”，“share my list with other”应为“share my list with others”。建议注意拼写和复数形式，表达更准确。

Ví dụ: I prefer to write my list on my phone because it's always with me, which is more convenient. I can easily edit and rearrange items, and share the list with others through apps.

× It can ensure that I did not forget anything important and help me to stay within my budget.

✓ It can ensure that I do not forget anything important and help me to stay within my budget.

这里使用一般现在时，因为描述的是习惯性动作，而不是过去发生的事情。

× It can control myself to not buy anything extra which is not necessary.

✓ It can help me control myself to not buy anything extra which is not necessary.

“control myself”前需要有动词帮助，这里缺少动词，应该加上“help me”使句子完整。

× I usually charaktery item by session of shock for efficiency and I used.

✓ I usually categorize items by section of the shop for efficiency and I use it.

原句中“charaktery”拼写错误，应为“categorize”；“session of shock”应为“section of the shop”；“I used”时态错误，应为“I use it”。

× It helps me stay organized and focus on my task and use a digital app to keep track of my work list which send me reminder.

✓ It helps me stay organized and focus on my tasks, and I use a digital app to keep track of my work list which sends me reminders.

句子中缺少主语“I”在“use a digital app”前；“task”应为复数“tasks”；“send”应为第三人称单数“sends”；“reminder”应为复数“reminders”。

× I find that my positivity increase when I follow a list and I feel a sense of successful when I check off complete test.

✓ I find that my positivity increases when I follow a list and I feel a sense of success when I check off completed tasks.

“increase”应为第三人称单数形式“increases”；“successful”是形容词，需用名词“success”；“complete test”应为“completed tasks”。

× Some individual think that making a list was racing time.

✓ Some individuals think that making a list is wasting time.

“individual”应为复数“individuals”；“was racing time”拼写错误，应为“is wasting time”，且时态应为现在时。

× They feel confident in their ability to remember task without writing them down, and they will rather use that time to start their work as soon as possible.

✓ They feel confident in their ability to remember tasks without writing them down, and they would rather use that time to start their work as soon as possible.

“task”应为复数“tasks”；“will rather”应为“would rather”。

× I prefer to drop down a list on my phone because it's always with me, making it more convenience.

✓ I prefer to write down a list on my phone because it's always with me, making it more convenient.

“drop down a list”用词不当，应为“write down a list”；“convenience”是名词，需用形容词“convenient”。

× I can easily edit and rearrange item on a digital list and they are apps that help me organize my list better.

✓ I can easily edit and rearrange items on a digital list and there are apps that help me organize my list better.

“item”应为复数“items”；“they are apps”语序错误，应为“there are apps”。

× On top of that, I can share my list with other easily through my phone.

✓ On top of that, I can share my list with others easily through my phone.

“other”应为复数形式“others”，表示“其他人”。