Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually write her list on my phone and when I go shopping I will check it one by one to make sure that I have already get all things I need.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I make a list of all my work and such house the merge of timetable. I put everything I need to do on the something I have the option to choose. It's very useful.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Maybe some people don't like her make lists because of the one do things more freedom freely than Lee and then I think the list is very complex and the hard to write everything.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer make a list on my phone 'cause it's very convenient and I can check it anytime or everywhere and I can easily edit when something goes wrong.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和用词不当,例如“her list”应为“a list”,“have already get”应为“have already got”。建议注意冠词和时态的正确使用,同时避免重复表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually write a shopping list on my phone, and when I go shopping, I check it one by one to make sure I have got everything I need.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答中表达不清晰,句子结构混乱,影响理解。建议简化句子,直接回答问题,并用连词连接支持细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list of all my tasks and merge it with my timetable. This helps me organize my work efficiently, so it is very useful.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答语法错误较多,表达不连贯,影响理解。建议使用简单句子表达观点,并用连词连接原因。
Ví dụ: Maybe some people don't like making lists because they prefer to do things more freely. Also, they might find lists complicated and hard to write.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然,但有小的语法错误,如缺少动词不定式的to。建议注意动词形式和连词的使用,使表达更准确。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient. I can check it anytime and anywhere, and I can easily edit it if something changes.
× Yes, I usually write her list on my phone and when I go shopping I will check it one by one to make sure that I have already get all things I need.
✓ Yes, I usually write my list on my phone and when I go shopping I will check it one by one to make sure that I have already got all the things I need.
这里“her list”中的“her”使用错误,应该用“my”表示“我的”。另外,“have already get”中“get”应为过去分词“got”,因为前面有助动词“have”。
× Yes, I usually write her list on my phone and when I go shopping I will check it one by one to make sure that I have already get all things I need.
✓ Yes, I usually write my list on my phone and when I go shopping I will check it one by one to make sure that I have already got all the things I need.
“have already get”中“get”应使用过去分词形式“got”,因为现在完成时态需要过去分词。
× Yes, I make a list of all my work and such house the merge of timetable.
✓ Yes, I make a list of all my work, such as merging the timetable.
原句结构混乱,“such house the merge of timetable”不通顺,应改为“such as merging the timetable”表示“比如合并时间表”。
× I put everything I need to do on the something I have the option to choose.
✓ I put everything I need to do on something I have the option to choose from.
“on the something”中“the”使用错误,应去掉;“choose”后缺少介词“from”,表示“从中选择”。
× Maybe some people don't like her make lists because of the one do things more freedom freely than Lee and then I think the list is very complex and the hard to write everything.
✓ Maybe some people don't like to make lists because they want to do things more freely, and I think the list is very complex and hard to write everything down.
“her make lists”应改为“to make lists”;“the one do things more freedom freely than Lee”语法错误,改为“they want to do things more freely”;“the hard”应去掉“the”;“write everything”后加“down”更完整。
× I prefer make a list on my phone 'cause it's very convenient and I can check it anytime or everywhere and I can easily edit when something goes wrong.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient and I can check it anytime or anywhere, and I can easily edit it when something goes wrong.
“prefer make”应为“prefer to make”;“'cause”正式场合应用“because”;“anytime or everywhere”中“everywhere”应改为“anywhere”;“edit”后应加宾语“it”。