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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need and saves money.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

I make a list of all tasks for my work, but it doesn't always work because I don't always follow it perfectly.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

Some people don't like making lists because they think it makes their lives more complicated and perform to keeping things simple and flexible.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

Are usually making less on my phone because it is more convenient and I can check it anywhere without carrying extra items like a notebook.

Đánh giá

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Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答比较自然且直接,但可以增加一些具体细节来丰富内容,比如说明你如何制定购物清单或举例说明清单如何帮助你节省开支。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need and saves money. For example, last week I avoided buying unnecessary snacks because I stuck to my list strictly.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答中表达了观点,但缺少连贯的连接词和具体细节。建议使用连接词如“however”来连接句子,并说明为什么不能完全遵守清单。

Ví dụ: I make a list of all tasks for my work; however, it doesn't always work because sometimes unexpected tasks come up, and I have to adjust my plan.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清的问题。建议改进句子结构,使用更准确的表达,并增加具体原因。

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it complicates their lives and prefer to keep things simple and flexible.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整。建议改正语法错误,使用完整句子,并增加具体细节说明为什么手机更方便。

Ví dụ: I usually make lists on my phone because it is more convenient; I can check it anywhere without carrying extra items like a notebook, and I can easily edit the list if needed.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect conjunction use

× Some people don't like making lists because they think it makes their lives more complicated and perform to keeping things simple and flexible.

Some people don't like making lists because they think it makes their lives more complicated and prefer to keep things simple and flexible.

句中使用了错误的连词“and perform to”,应改为“and prefer to”,表示“并且更喜欢”。这是连词使用错误,导致句意不清。建议使用正确的连词和动词形式,使句子通顺。

Sentence structure errors

× Are usually making less on my phone because it is more convenient and I can check it anywhere without carrying extra items like a notebook.

I usually make lists on my phone because it is more convenient and I can check it anywhere without carrying extra items like a notebook.

句子缺少主语,且“less”应为“lists”,动词形式错误。正确句子应有明确主语“I”,动词用一般现在时“make”,名词复数“lists”。这是句子结构错误,导致句子不完整。建议注意主语和动词的一致性,确保句子完整。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

ExtraAdditional; Exceptionally; In addition; Addition; Walk-on
SimpleStraightforward; Clear; Plain; Candid
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