List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is too short and incomplete. Try to give a full sentence that directly answers the question and add a brief reason or example to make it more natural and effective. For example, say "Yes, I usually make a list when I shop to make sure I don't forget anything."

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop to make sure I don't forget anything important.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some good points but is unclear and lacks coherence. Use linking words to connect ideas and clarify your meaning. Also, avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. For example, say "Yes, I do make lists for work. Sometimes they help me stay organised, but unexpected events can disrupt my plans."

Ví dụ: Yes, I do make lists for work. Sometimes they help me stay organised, but unexpected events can disrupt my plans, so the list doesn't always work perfectly.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good ideas but is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammar mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to organise your points logically. For example, say "Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to go with the flow, which allows them to be more adaptable if things don't go as planned."

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to go with the flow, which allows them to be more adaptable if things don't go as planned.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence and explain your preference with reasons, using linking words for coherence. For example, say "I prefer to make lists both on paper and on my phone because sometimes I forget my notebook, but using my phone too much can distract me."

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists both on paper and on my phone because sometimes I forget my notebook, but using my phone too much can distract me from my work.

× Yes, I.

✓ Yes, I do.

The original sentence 'Yes, I.' is incomplete and lacks a verb, which is necessary to form a complete sentence. The correct response to the question 'Do you make a list when you shop?' requires the auxiliary verb 'do' to confirm the action. Therefore, 'Yes, I do.' is the proper form.

× I'm sometimes it works, sometimes anything can happen.

✓ Sometimes it works, sometimes anything can happen.

The phrase 'I'm sometimes it works' is grammatically incorrect because 'I'm' (I am) is unnecessary and disrupts the sentence structure. Removing 'I'm' clarifies the meaning and forms a correct sentence.

× it leads to me not there is not working.

✓ it leads to me not working.

The phrase 'leads to me not there is not working' is incorrect and confusing. The correct preposition 'to' should be followed by a gerund ('working'). The phrase 'there is not' is unnecessary and incorrect here. The corrected sentence is 'it leads to me not working.'

× And sometimes the workflow is good.

✓ Sometimes the workflow is good.

Starting a sentence with 'And' in formal speech is generally discouraged. Removing 'And' improves sentence structure and clarity.

× It can be a hustle to make our list 'cause you're planning for a day that is unlearn.

✓ It can be a hassle to make our list 'cause you're planning for a day that is unknown.

The word 'hustle' is incorrectly used; the correct word is 'hassle' meaning inconvenience. Also, 'unlearn' is incorrect in this context; the intended meaning is 'unknown' or 'uncertain'. Correcting these improves clarity and accuracy.

× So people before working with the flow as it's much easier to it's gonna be easier to be adaptable.

✓ So people prefer working with the flow as it's much easier to be adaptable.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Adding 'prefer' clarifies the subject's action, and removing redundant phrases improves sentence structure.

× To anything that happened rather than having a plan and then it falls through.

✓ To anything that happens rather than having a plan and then it falls through.

The verb tense 'happened' is past tense, but the context requires present tense 'happens' to match the ongoing nature of events.

× Happy by making on both.

✓ I'm happy making lists on both.

The original sentence lacks a subject and proper verb form. Adding 'I'm' and clarifying the object 'lists' improves sentence structure and clarity.

× if I don't have my notebook and I don't have my lease, it's gonna stress me out an if I use my phone all the time and might not concentrate mostly on my work.

✓ If I don't have my notebook and I don't have my list, it's gonna stress me out, and if I use my phone all the time, I might not concentrate mostly on my work.

The word 'lease' is incorrect; it should be 'list'. Also, the sentence is a run-on and needs proper conjunctions and commas to separate clauses for clarity.

× Henceforth it before making using both.

✓ Therefore, I prefer using both.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Replacing 'Henceforth it before making using both' with 'Therefore, I prefer using both' conveys the intended meaning clearly and correctly.