Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always make a list when I sucked too, not to make so that I don't forget anything important in save my money. For example when I go to supermarket for my mother, I will write them down and bring it belong to me.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually make a list for my work and it worked very effectively. When I make a list for my work, it helps me to organize my task and focus on what I want to do. So this met hard help me to focus on what I want to do in Spain.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
In my experience on windows down like Mike Inglis because they feel confident about their ability without writing them down and they spend this time to diff trait into their work in a focus on anything else.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I would rate a Michael is on my phone later Dane. On the paper because I think making a list on my phone will be more convenient and effective because I can use my phone own day an I conceeded rearing on the apps too.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, đồng thời sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tự nhiên và có cấu trúc rõ ràng. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping to avoid forgetting important items and to save money. For example, when I go to the supermarket for my mother, I write down everything she needs and bring the list with me.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Bạn cần chú ý đến ngữ pháp và từ vựng chính xác hơn, tránh lỗi sai và câu không rõ nghĩa. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và thêm liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về cách danh sách giúp bạn trong công việc.
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list for my work, and it works very effectively. Making a list helps me organize my tasks and focus on what I need to do each day. Therefore, it improves my productivity and reduces stress.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và cung cấp lý do cụ thể, có liên kết logic giữa các ý.
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they feel confident in remembering tasks without writing them down. They prefer to spend their time focusing directly on their work instead of making lists.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Bạn cần trả lời rõ ràng và chính xác hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Hãy bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó giải thích lý do và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.
Ví dụ: I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because it is more convenient and effective. I can access my list anytime and use apps that help me organize my tasks better.
× Yes, I always make a list when I sucked too, not to make so that I don't forget anything important in save my money.
✓ Yes, I always make a list when I shop too, so that I don't forget anything important and can save my money.
The word 'sucked' is incorrect here; the intended verb is 'shop' in present tense to match the habitual action. Also, the sentence structure is confusing and needs rephrasing for clarity and correct verb usage.
× For example when I go to supermarket for my mother, I will write them down and bring it belong to me.
✓ For example, when I go to the supermarket for my mother, I write the items down and bring them with me.
The phrase 'go to supermarket' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Bring it belong to me' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'bring them with me' to indicate carrying the list.
× Yes, I usually make a list for my work and it worked very effectively.
✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work and it works very effectively.
The verb 'worked' is past tense but the sentence refers to a habitual action, so present tense 'works' is appropriate.
× When I make a list for my work, it helps me to organize my task and focus on what I want to do.
✓ When I make a list for my work, it helps me to organize my tasks and focus on what I want to do.
The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because it refers to multiple activities.
× So this met hard help me to focus on what I want to do in Spain.
✓ So this method helps me to focus on what I want to do in Spain.
The phrase 'met hard' is incorrect; it should be 'method'. Also, 'helps' is the correct verb form for third person singular.
× In my experience on windows down like Mike Inglis because they feel confident about their ability without writing them down and they spend this time to diff trait into their work in a focus on anything else.
✓ In my experience, some people don't like making lists because they feel confident about their ability without writing things down and they spend this time focusing on their work instead of anything else.
The original sentence has many unclear and incorrect phrases. 'On windows down like Mike Inglis' is nonsensical and replaced with 'some people'. 'Them' is replaced with 'things' to refer to items on the list. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct pronoun use.
× I would rate a Michael is on my phone later Dane. On the paper because I think making a list on my phone will be more convenient and effective because I can use my phone own day an I conceeded rearing on the apps too.
✓ I would rather make a list on my phone than on paper because I think making a list on my phone is more convenient and effective since I can use my phone anywhere and I can use apps too.
The original sentence contains many errors and unclear phrases. 'Rate a Michael is' is corrected to 'rather make'. 'Later Dane' is corrected to 'than on paper'. 'Own day an I conceeded rearing' is corrected to 'anywhere and I can use'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct preposition and verb usage.